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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 116)
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| Richard Butler |
Really kept my interest, good sound design, will be giving it more listens. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by Constantin
my WIP xD
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Beautiful melody mate, I think this is great trance, but that lead that comes in about 1.50 needs to get wet with fx as the piano begins to fade as its way too dry. |
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| Richard Butler |
Anyway, here's the track I posted a couple of weeks back. Can you let me have some thoughts before I finish it.
Cheers
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| Evolve140 |
Thanks for checking the tune guys. Rich cool tune but to me the trancey elements together with DNB don't work well for me. I like this kind of music served dark. Production seems pretty spot on though.
if you guys have anything you want me to check just post it here and i'll look at it and give you some feedback.
just finished this up yesterday:
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| Seandroid |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Anyway, here's the track I posted a couple of weeks back. Can you let me have some thoughts before I finish it.
Cheers
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The intro is very nice - I like the atmospheric elements a lot. The vocal sounds good for the most part but does sound strained in some places. I really do like this track a lot though. The percussion is really cool and I like how distant it sounds. Lots of neat percussion and FX in there. Nice work dude!
| quote: | Originally posted by Constantin
my WIP xD
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Uplifting! I like the progression even if it's a little cliched.
I've finished Gravity. It's rather different from when I posted it a while ago, and the 2nd drop is completely changed. I'm EXTREMELY proud of it.
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| Constantin |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Anyway, here's the track I posted a couple of weeks back. Can you let me have some thoughts before I finish it.
Cheers
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As Seandroid mentioned, very atmospheric. About vocals don't know what to say I am not a fan of vocals in electronic music, so will you make a dub version also xD ?
I've finished Gravity. It's rather different from when I posted it a while ago, and the 2nd drop is completely changed. I'm EXTREMELY proud of it.
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Very dirty and melodic, very interesting for my ears ;) |
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| Richard Butler |
Seandroid, you pulled off a very pro piece of work there. I particularly enjoyed the intro with it's melodic romp.
Thanks for the feedback people, will re-do the vocals and add more lyrics - the ones in there were a rough and ready test with tv and pets noise in the back ground! |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
Thanks for checking the tune guys. Rich cool tune but to me the trancey elements together with DNB don't work well for me. I like this kind of music served dark. Production seems pretty spot on though.
if you guys have anything you want me to check just post it here and i'll look at it and give you some feedback.
just finished this up yesterday:
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cool track, love the trippy-ness in places!! maybe a touch more volume on that detuned saw lead? like 2db max just to bring it up more in focus?? but thats nitpicking ;) |
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| TranceElevation |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Anyway, here's the track I posted a couple of weeks back. Can you let me have some thoughts before I finish it.
Cheers
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Don't know what you did there, but I don't feel it anymore.
Maybe if I could reference it versus the previous version I might tell you what happened.
At first sight low end ain't that involving anymore, but vocals improved a lot this time. |
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| Richard Butler |
Is the bass on this one ok?
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| TranceElevation |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Is the bass on this one ok?
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Man, are you ok?
Everything is so squashed and loud. My poor ears. |
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| evo8 |
| agree, just no space at all, bass seems to drowned out |
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