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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by djnitride
Hi guys, long time no see :D
Feeling old school proggy.... Does the concept of the song work? Anything sticking out like a sore thumb? I need to clean up the reverb on the drums a bit I think.
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I like it. Kick is sporadically clicky at the beginning and the end when playing solo. Very much like the pad. Arp is nice too.
Maybe some rhythm powerup at 2:10
At 2:55 i miss bassline, it sounds too empty for me there. Maybe some slightly faster variation of bassline at this point. |
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| djnitride |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
I like it. Kick is sporadically clicky at the beginning and the end when playing solo. Very much like the pad. Arp is nice too.
Maybe some rhythm powerup at 2:10
At 2:55 i miss bassline, it sounds too empty for me there. Maybe some slightly faster variation of bassline at this point. |
Great feedback, thanks :)
Uploaded an updated version that hopefully addresses some of this. Next up is mixing I think...
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by djnitride
Great feedback, thanks :)
Uploaded an updated version that hopefully addresses some of this. Next up is mixing I think...
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It's better now |
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| gordan100 |
Here some more crap of mine. I think i'm doing the same song all over again.
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| djnitride |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Here some more crap of mine. I think i'm doing the same song all over again.
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Like it, only thing I might suggest would be opening it up a little at some point in the song for contrast, although I do like the progression you got going already. |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by djnitride
Like it, only thing I might suggest would be opening it up a little at some point in the song for contrast, although I do like the progression you got going already. |
Thanks! |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Here some more crap of mine. I think i'm doing the same song all over again.
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i think maybe at this stage you might be overcomplicating things? i remember your older tracks were just simpler elements but grooved really well, just my 2c |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by djnitride
Great feedback, thanks :)
Uploaded an updated version that hopefully addresses some of this. Next up is mixing I think...
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yeah, i kinda like this, i like the sound of the midrange are you boosting there or something tricky?
it could do with a nice sub bassline undercurrent, just something incidental and punchy, that still maintains the groove ...imo |
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| evo8 |
new one, will see where it goes
another one, really like the drop in this
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| djnitride |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
another one, really like the drop in this
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This one caught my ear, like the song concept and good mixing on the bottom end of the track. Only suggestion would be maybe to do some percussion variation with the cymbal rides towards the end, and maybe bring out the percussion high-mids/highs more in the mix when you have all the other elements going after the breakdown.. Could easily hear this in a Drumcode set.
Also, how is hearthis.at? Better than Soundcloud? |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
new one, will see where it goes
another one, really like the drop in this
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I like them both :) |
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| gordan100 |
This one may not be that bad
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