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| Richard Butler |
I'm a do some feedback in a minute, but in the meantime my first proper uk grime wip
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by MSZ
Richard im the illest rapper the suburbs have ever seen, lemme spit pure 24K gold on those beats son.
This isnt really going anywhere for now, trying to record differently but im getting static from this HD Realtek soundcard on my computer, gotta figure it out. |
dunno about the beat honestly but greyat atmospheric synths as ever, I would love you to put some on my grime track, spooky synths that is |
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| MSZ |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I'm a do some feedback in a minute, but in the meantime my first proper uk grime wip
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Im not well versed in this genre but I think you pulled it off, but I dont think I could add to it it seems there already. Just a note I think the compression is a bit abusive, and its warping the treble a bit from the top vocal transient, just my 2cents. Im using inadequate headphones right now so keep that in mind. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by MSZ
Im not well versed in this genre but I think you pulled it off, but I dont think I could add to it it seems there already. Just a note I think the compression is a bit abusive, and its warping the treble a bit from the top vocal transient, just my 2cents. Im using inadequate headphones right now so keep that in mind. |
Cheers I added variation now and adjusted the compression as u recommended |
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| Richard Butler |
You progressive guys, after the first drop should I then go into a melodic pad type break with no drums or back into the beat and bass like in the intro?
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
You progressive guys, after the first drop should I then go into a melodic pad type break with no drums or back into the beat and bass like in the intro?
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this kind of grew on me as the track went on! interesting chord changes, i wouldnt really change anything here just finish it off |
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| Richard Butler |
Yes Ive progressed it a lot since you heard it
It drew me in to, but Im still not sure if its cool or not |
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| evo8 |
making a lot of tracks last couple of weeks, heres a flavour
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
making a lot of tracks last couple of weeks, heres a flavour
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As always a nice atmosphere - is there no bass deliberately? I'm not saying you have to put one in, it's pretty cool without in fact - although maybe one could come in after a long wait - that would be quite an original concept (well not something I can recall coming across anyway) |
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| Richard Butler |
QUESTION for SEANDROID or anyone else;
I am near completing this trap track, is it missing some big synth leed do you think? The vocals are very engaging IMO and so I didn't want to detract from them, but I'm just not sure if I should put in some big weird trap lead?
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Woony
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duuuuuuuuuuude, this is great! sounds really nice on the ears, nothing harsh or overcompressed - the arp is simple but effective, bassline fits well, drums are simple as well, nice job! |
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