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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 297)
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| Raphie |
Doing that Cryo remix that everyone does :D a WIP
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| Innocence Lost |
| You rock man, that is proper. ^ |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Just replace the original (old) one with a short version of latest production as (and it was my mistake lol) I should upload newer version right from the beginning :D
The reason behind was that (and happened to me already) sometime if I share a full and ready to go production on SoundCloud it was distributed all over the net and free for download :whip:
Cheers guys and thanks for some rough but honest comments :D
Just in the case if somebody doesn't like to go back and find this latest (but short) version on this track then here we go:
Darek |
sounds a bit tighter Darek - i would compress the vox a good bit more (with a nice vox compressor obv.)
i think some buss compression would help to tighten the mix up as well, its a little bit too jumpy in places for me, not saying to flatten it altogether as dynamics are good but a little compression could be nice
potential is there for a nice track anyway imo! |
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| Raphie |
i would leave that to mastering, open is good ;)
The voice can use a bit more compression though, to even it out.
And I'm finding the mix a bit "thin" in the midrange, needs a bit more depth there, maybe different reverb |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
sounds a bit tighter Darek - i would compress the vox a good bit more (with a nice vox compressor obv.)
i think some buss compression would help to tighten the mix up as well, its a little bit too jumpy in places for me, not saying to flatten it altogether as dynamics are good but a little compression could be nice
potential is there for a nice track anyway imo! |
Thanks Paul, some of your recommendations are already implemented and some of those compression issues will be cover in mastering stage (or even in mixing when requested by mastering expert lol), great to hear your take on this production man, appreciate :D
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
i would leave that to mastering, open is good ;)
The voice can use a bit more compression though, to even it out.
And I'm finding the mix a bit "thin" in the midrange, needs a bit more depth there, maybe different reverb |
Lol, you know you going to hear from me :stongue: |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
Doing that Cryo remix that everyone does :D a WIP
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Sounds interesting to me Raphie - very polished and clean production with smooth but dynamic melodic vibe all over it lol -> but I would like to hear some dirty sub-baseline with modulated sounds on it, I think it would add some needed bite to this track for attractiveness.
Cheers,
Darek |
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| Raphie |
| Thnx , yes some gritt will be added soon :) the progression is all Dave, though tonight I made some nice variations. Interesting project. |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
i would leave that to mastering, open is good ;)
The voice can use a bit more compression though, to even it out.
And I'm finding the mix a bit "thin" in the midrange, needs a bit more depth there, maybe different reverb |
yeah open is good and you might be able to do something with the mix to help it along - i just find the mix a bit unsettling in places |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Thanks Paul, some of your recommendations are already implemented and some of those compression issues will be cover in mastering stage (or even in mixing when requested by mastering expert lol), great to hear your take on this production man, appreciate :D
Darek |
anytime man! |
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| chris marsh |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
Doing that Cryo remix that everyone does :D a WIP
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loving the trance gated vocals on this
i think the bass could do with some mid range growl on top of the sub, its too simple at the moment imo
i like the drum groove and hats and synth
good work! |
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| chris marsh |
finally got some vocals on this, my life's been kind of busy recently! |
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