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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 272)
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
Yep! The vibe is there, whats missing is a female ROLAND lick on the 2 and 4 and ehhmm or ooowhh or yeah, but chopped in the groove and blended in the backgrond, makes it nice and deep |
thanks raph might look into adding a little sample in there |
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| Andy28 |
| Sounding really good so far, I like it evo. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
Yep! The vibe is there, whats missing is a female ROLAND lick on the 2 and 4 and ehhmm or ooowhh or yeah, but chopped in the groove and blended in the backgrond, makes it nice and deep |
Liking the swing on this, nice sounds overall. I would vary that 'woop - wuut' tom thing every 4th bar.
Add a little vocal morsel here n there to give it another push.
RAPHIE has mastered Clown, here it is, I wanted to post this up as a thanks to Raphie so people can get a sense of how he's improved it.
I notice now that an electrical click appeared in the break during my export, lol, oh well sorta adds to the track.
Now to find a label!
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Liking the swing on this, nice sounds overall. I would vary that 'woop - wuut' tom thing every 4th bar.
Add a little vocal morsel here n there to give it another push.
RAPHIE has mastered Clown, here it is, I wanted to post this up as a thanks to Raphie so people can get a sense of how he's improved it.
I notice now that an electrical click appeared in the break during my export, lol, oh well sorta adds to the track.
Now to find a label!
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Not my cup of tea but definitely appreciate quality of this track Richard and with Raphie final touches/polishing of it sounds really good.
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
another one from me - concentrating on percussion and groove
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Have some nice Industrial flavor and pretty sweet vibe - it is all about what to do next with it will determinate future fate of this WIP - so far so good !!!
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
As usual after hours spend in studio working on some commitments I end up going through some quick and funny track creation process as form of resetting my state of the mind lol - if you know what mean lol -> here is the result:
Nothing special, nothing pretty just letting my creativity flow lol :D
Cheers,
Darek |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
As usual after hours spend in studio working on some commitments I end up going through some quick and funny track creation process as form of resetting my state of the mind lol - if you know what mean lol -> here is the result:
Nothing special, nothing pretty just letting my creativity flow lol :D
Cheers,
Darek |
That's not bad at all mate and it got me moving as it has a good groove and feel. At 1.38 you bring in some cheesey synth line, this totally spoils the track.
I would say don't put a clap on so many of the downbeats as it slightly detracts from the groove (I know some big festival tracks employ a clap like this but it suits that style). |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
So finally a real WIP from me, I'm doing a remix of one of Calebs tracks and this is what i got so far:
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I like the synths. The tribal toms thing is ok, but a bit GM sounding. Layer them up / play a few by hand loosely, vary them as at the mo they are too static and basic.
This track for me could use a change of note on the bass at some point to give that satisfying melodic release, and you need a better bassline anyway, something much more original and groovy. I know Raphie you hate over production and messed with tracks so maybe you will stick with what you've got. |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
As usual after hours spend in studio working on some commitments I end up going through some quick and funny track creation process as form of resetting my state of the mind lol - if you know what mean lol -> here is the result:
Nothing special, nothing pretty just letting my creativity flow lol :D
Cheers,
Darek |
the percussion is nice and jackin but the whole thing is just too cheesy for me! :) |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
the percussion is nice and jackin but the whole thing is just too cheesy for me! :) |
LOL, this is cool man, you know me I like cheesy stuff :D
Next would be some Vocal Trance which I'm currently working on with my friend Carlos, Amy and Dave lol - you could see my another site ;)
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
That's not bad at all mate and it got me moving as it has a good groove and feel. At 1.38 you bring in some cheesey synth line, this totally spoils the track.
I would say don't put a clap on so many of the downbeats as it slightly detracts from the groove (I know some big festival tracks employ a clap like this but it suits that style). |
Cheers brother and appreciate your suggestion - will let this one go on shelf as I have too many commitments at the moment :D
Darek |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I like the synths. The tribal toms thing is ok, but a bit GM sounding. Layer them up / play a few by hand loosely, vary them as at the mo they are too static and basic.
This track for me could use a change of note on the bass at some point to give that satisfying melodic release, and you need a better bassline anyway, something much more original and groovy. I know Raphie you hate over production and messed with tracks so maybe you will stick with what you've got. |
I have a chord progression in the original. I had the same thought when I heard it but I think he is planning to add the progression in the part after the clip ends. |
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