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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 410)
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Todays work. Not happy with the kick now when listening on speakers.
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hey Gordan this is really cool, especially when that staccato sound comes in, it fits really nice, that little wobbly bass sound is a nice contrast, kinda old prog vibes of this
only thing im not sure on are those piano notes - i think the kick is ok! |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I'm pleased with this handbag house, lol
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Rich this is good, a bit too much going on for me but its ok the mixing is very good, i think you could do a little work on the groove, id push that filtered chord a bit just to give it a more lazy housey feel |
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| Evolve140 |
| hey guys how is everyone? sorry been MIA |
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| alanzo |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
hey guys how is everyone? sorry been MIA |
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| Evolve140 |
| quote: | Originally posted by alanzo
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aw that's cute *hugs* |
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| alanzo |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
aw that's cute *hugs* |
Better response: "Whatever n00b, why don't you post something new on your soundcloud? Or better yet, why don't you repost a track you did six years ago?" |
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| Evolve140 |
| quote: | Originally posted by alanzo
Better response: "Whatever n00b, why don't you post something new on your soundcloud? Or better yet, why don't you repost a track you did six years ago?" |
no way I'm proper medicated m8 |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
hey Gordan this is really cool, especially when that staccato sound comes in, it fits really nice, that little wobbly bass sound is a nice contrast, kinda old prog vibes of this
only thing im not sure on are those piano notes - i think the kick is ok! |
Thanks! Here's a bit longer version with different piano sound, same melody though, last chord slightly modified. Yeah, maybe i should try some more, but didn't come up with anything better yet.
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I'm pleased with this handbag house, lol
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Very nice work Richard, you got something special going on in there mate - as far as any suggestion (structurally) I would cut 1:31~2:02 part out of this WIP and the rest is pretty good to go - really nice flow man.
EDIT: Actually I would cut 1:15~2:05 exact lol.
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| TranceLover007 |
One more think Richard - I would add a nice melodic pluck in the second part of your track to spice up your melody a bit.
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I'm pleased with this handbag house, lol
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Sounds very nice. I would also cut that 1:31-2:02 part out. |
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| MSZ |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Thanks! Here's a bit longer version with different piano sound, same melody though, last chord slightly modified. Yeah, maybe i should try some more, but didn't come up with anything better yet.
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Hey I cant give any technical feedback as I dont have monitors for a while, but first it sounds up my alley. I think this lacks any sort of resolution or destination, I bet you feel the same way. I would try to convey something first and THEN try to fix the interesting production puzzle, I believe in you. My 2 cents but I am probably talking in bias. |
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