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| Raphie |
some more development, bit deeper grooves, again live, but trying out the grooves for laying out the tracks. pretty happy with the groove now, loads of subtile details, just need to work on the flow.
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| sylvannas |
Guess I posted it in the wrong section earlier. What do you guys think?? |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceElevation
@gordon100, I would make a trance remake of that melody with pleasure. |
Well, go for it! I would like to hear this song from another viewpoint. And i hope we'll split share when your version breaks all trance chart records :) |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by sylvannas
Guess I posted it in the wrong section earlier. What do you guys think?? |
I like it. Very soft and ear sweet, nice bassline, love the vocal sample, it fits perfect. The only thing i may not like is the drum crush sound. |
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| sylvannas |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
I like it. Very soft and ear sweet, nice bassline, love the vocal sample, it fits perfect. The only thing i may not like is the drum crush sound. |
Thanks a lot for the feedback :)
Are you talking about the drum sample I used? |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Hi everybody,
i'm an total music amateur, and everything i heard on this topic sounds more professional than my work, so i'm not pretty usefull for giving technical comments. I can only say if i like the song or not, and so i will, so help me god :)
What i need is a feedback for this track. I didn't work much on it. Deegee pointed out that main melody is off beat with the rest of the track. Sometimes I notice that, sometimes i don't. What do you guys think?
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This is actualy pretty cool and different and I enjoy the overall sound. The main leed is a bit too omnipresent, maybe replace it with something else here n there. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by Oakenshield
any one know were i got this melody from i swear i have heard it before!
its just the structure atm |
I really like the melody and chord work once it gets going and it sounds good to. Maybe the open hat is a bit standard though. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
staying on a prog theme, happy with this one also!
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wow another fantastic pallet of sounds and mixing. Watch that low verby tom it's clashing with lows and a bit muddy.
Drop is great but gets a bit repetitive, needs something to come in after about 16 measures. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
some more development, bit deeper grooves, again live, but trying out the grooves for laying out the tracks. pretty happy with the groove now, loads of subtile details, just need to work on the flow.
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This is the best track from you and the groOve is luscious and very warehouse cool.
Just needs a few more sounds here n there, you know cinematic type things, maybe a faraway vocal stab whatever. I was desperate for a shuffling little hi hat to join the fun at about 3 minutes.
Finish this one. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by sylvannas
Guess I posted it in the wrong section earlier. What do you guys think?? |
jeeze some real good tracks on here lately and this is another. Really satisfying, sort of thing I'd love humming to in a cool surf clothing shop.
Only thing I don't like is the snare. I'd say only use that on say every 4th measure. Try and get snares hits to vary over say an 8 bar loop using subbtle eq automation etc so it does not get static. |
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| Richard Butler |
So the feedback I got on this caused me to try and make something more atmospheric, I hope I've pulled it off.
Any mix issues - bass too wooden for example? Maybe this bass no longer suits this changed track?
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
wow another fantastic pallet of sounds and mixing. Watch that low verby tom it's clashing with lows and a bit muddy.
Drop is great but gets a bit repetitive, needs something to come in after about 16 measures. |
thanks, might EQ that tom roll a bit better, a few more tweaks needed here and there! |
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