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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 132)
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by chris marsh
ive posted this up before, but done a final mix down and added some other instruments. Going to send out soon so any thoughts (especially mix wise) really appreciated
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hi Chris i think i commented on this one before, as i said not really my cup of tea but the mix sounds nice and balanced here anyway, good luck with it :) |
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| chris marsh |
| Thanks rich and evo. Dud quite a few revisions which is why I reposted. Couple more to do still. Thanks. :) |
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| Constantin |
| quote: | Originally posted by chris marsh
ive posted this up before, but done a final mix down and added some other instruments. Going to send out soon so any thoughts (especially mix wise) really appreciated
Ta
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Howdy! Not a fan of this genre, but your mix sounds spot on, on all my devices ;).
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Anyways, so this DnB called English Boys (lolli love - ditched that name) I posted here recently has now morphed into some sorta DnB meets Florida hip hop, mmm, dunno is it just too hard too follow / too weird?
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On my crappy headphones which I use to listen music and stuff most of the time, your tune looks to be a bit to rich in highs which makes my ears a bit fatigue after a while, but hope is just me.
Here is my WIP again, I tried to take in consideration all your feedback and apply it, hope that with success :nervous:
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| scorpradio |
Seems more and more I am testing all areas of EDM and this track seems to be yet another attempt at something more me.
I am in the beginning stages of this song and basically this is an intro,yet...I found myself at 1:40 before even a build,so..this is where it stands.
Any feedback greatly appreciated as always.
*note, I am definitely taking notice lately on big room and bass sounds...this isnt as easy as I thought it would be. How the hell does Seven lions and these guys make such huuuuge sounds.
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Constantin
Howdy! Not a fan of this genre, but your mix sounds spot on, on all my devices ;).
On my crappy headphones which I use to listen music and stuff most of the time, your tune looks to be a bit to rich in highs which makes my ears a bit fatigue after a while, but hope is just me.
Here is my WIP again, I tried to take in consideration all your feedback and apply it, hope that with success :nervous:
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dont like the kick, too clicky or something |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
Seems more and more I am testing all areas of EDM and this track seems to be yet another attempt at something more me.
I am in the beginning stages of this song and basically this is an intro,yet...I found myself at 1:40 before even a build,so..this is where it stands.
Any feedback greatly appreciated as always.
*note, I am definitely taking notice lately on big room and bass sounds...this isnt as easy as I thought it would be. How the hell does Seven lions and these guys make such huuuuge sounds.
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guess its a good start, a lot will depend on what kind of bass you put in |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
Seems more and more I am testing all areas of EDM and this track seems to be yet another attempt at something more me.
I am in the beginning stages of this song and basically this is an intro,yet...I found myself at 1:40 before even a build,so..this is where it stands.
Any feedback greatly appreciated as always.
*note, I am definitely taking notice lately on big room and bass sounds...this isnt as easy as I thought it would be. How the hell does Seven lions and these guys make such huuuuge sounds.
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As far as this track beginning - very attractive so far ;) but you definitely need to work your bass line in second part of your track as future of your production depends on your bass design skills.
Cheers |
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| scorpradio |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
As far as this track beginning - very attractive so far ;) but you definitely need to work your bass line in second part of your track as future of your production depends on your bass design skills.
Cheers |
I totally agree, and this is making me nervous...lol
At the drop I have experimented with the arrangement and composition and am coming up short. I guess I am looking for something very sharp and poignant. Something of a stab on the 1st and 3rd measure (which I have only experimented with using tape stop) which I dont want to get to carried away with by over using the tape stop. Kinda stumped on my approach actually
Thanks for taking the time to listen guys...really appreciate the feedback as well |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
I totally agree, and this is making me nervous...lol
At the drop I have experimented with the arrangement and composition and am coming up short. I guess I am looking for something very sharp and poignant. Something of a stab on the 1st and 3rd measure (which I have only experimented with using tape stop) which I dont want to get to carried away with by over using the tape stop. Kinda stumped on my approach actually
Thanks for taking the time to listen guys...really appreciate the feedback as well |
Build your structure, design your sound and then we can start looking at schematics of your transitions -> but potential is definitely there ;)
Cheers,
Darek |
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| Seandroid |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
Seems more and more I am testing all areas of EDM and this track seems to be yet another attempt at something more me.
I am in the beginning stages of this song and basically this is an intro,yet...I found myself at 1:40 before even a build,so..this is where it stands.
Any feedback greatly appreciated as always.
*note, I am definitely taking notice lately on big room and bass sounds...this isnt as easy as I thought it would be. How the hell does Seven lions and these guys make such huuuuge sounds.
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I like the vocals a lot! I think you should have the word "heart" loop at the end of the phrase into a build up.
Like "colors of your heeaaaaaa" with the snare that comes in later entering there.
I'm excited to hear what you do for your bass sounds. I can probably provide a lot of advice there.
I finished the track I posted earlier.
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Seandroid
I like the vocals a lot! I think you should have the word "heart" loop at the end of the phrase into a build up.
Like "colors of your heeaaaaaa" with the snare that comes in later entering there.
I'm excited to hear what you do for your bass sounds. I can probably provide a lot of advice there.
I finished the track I posted earlier.
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:eek: :eyes: :eyespop: ;) ;) ;)
although If I could change something a bit - it would be this part around 2:15 which I was thinking about slowing and quiet it down a bit with some addition of more melodic break for more cross platform attractiveness of this track -> just my $0.02
Still very strong track man, congrats !!!
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
I totally agree, and this is making me nervous...lol
At the drop I have experimented with the arrangement and composition and am coming up short. I guess I am looking for something very sharp and poignant. Something of a stab on the 1st and 3rd measure (which I have only experimented with using tape stop) which I dont want to get to carried away with by over using the tape stop. Kinda stumped on my approach actually
Thanks for taking the time to listen guys...really appreciate the feedback as well |
Let me know when is done, I will see if I can push this to radio station I know ;) - I really like what I'm hearing right now !!!
Darek |
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