This is now finished apart from a proper mixing session to tame it a bit.
Thanks for the feeds.
Richard Butler
quote:
Originally posted by evo8
heres another techno one from me, trying to go darker and slightly more twisted, just roughly sketched out at the moment
edit: sorry, i should have cut a few minutes off that before i uploaded :-/
Nice n clean yet dirty enough and greayat bass again.
BTW - I have this techno WIP I'm working on - thought you might be interested (sorry to use youtube)
Richard Butler
quote:
Originally posted by Wayn0
someone please tell me what they think of this melody! :-)
Sounds decent to my ears. Finish.
TranceLover007
quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Nice n clean yet dirty enough and greayat bass again.
BTW - I have this techno WIP I'm working on - thought you might be interested (sorry to use youtube)
It was really nice going till 1:15 after that the rest didn't connect with me the same way as first min
I could have nice potential if you develop farther this first part Richard!!!
Darek
evo8
quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Nice n clean yet dirty enough and greayat bass again.
BTW - I have this techno WIP I'm working on - thought you might be interested (sorry to use youtube)
first couple of minutes form the basis of a really good techno track, the bass and kick works really well
but then its gets a bit crowded, that lead that comes in at 1:20 is way too loud and taking up too much room IMHO
atxbigballer1
just some bull made by me! I know I Suck!
Working on some 2013 stuff! :)
atxbigballer1
BTW
Happy Birthday to me! :)
05/07/2013
Vernon Wanderer
quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Nice n clean yet dirty enough and greayat bass again.
BTW - I have this techno WIP I'm working on - thought you might be interested (sorry to use youtube)
Partners
This is great, love the stereo field and the overall feel. Epic percussion work too. My only tip would be to reduce the level of the hat that comes every other beat, but just a minimal bit. And perhaps the left channel percussion is panned a bit too dramatically.
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Originally posted by atxbigballer1
just some bull made by me! I know I Suck!
Working on some 2013 stuff! :)
chill hau5 track
fan staff in the stud
Regarding the chill home track, I'd suggest getting more alive, less artificial-sounding (aka less processed) samples in the first place, and this really needs automation. Listen to Prydz for ideas.
Fun stuff - well, the parts of the track seem really disconnected to each other, borrow some sounds between the parts.. And the kick needs more attention, it sounds somewhat "cheap"
Both have solid potential if you keep working on them.
I haven't listened to the outher two.
And happy birthday :)
quote:
Originally posted by Wayn0
someone please tell me what they think of this melody! :-)
It's good, but the chords at 3 seconds and again at 11 seconds sound a bit unfitting, so work on those parts.
clay
quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Nice n clean yet dirty enough and greayat bass again.
BTW - I have this techno WIP I'm working on - thought you might be interested (sorry to use youtube)
that horn build should be +3 seminotes to fit the bass (or the bass -3)
TranceLover007
OK guys - just to resurrect this thread a bit I decided to share with you my latest vocal track - still in very early WIP stage but you could definitely hear and feel the direction I'm taking this track through.
At the moment is very dry yet as vocal need to be re-recorded (for now it is only a space reservation to complete structural arrangement).
She found me on SoundCloud and offer an collab on my track preview - so good things will happen with your dedication and persistence :D
So give it a run (it is a private track so you would not find it on SoundCloud):
DCH New Concept MAY 05 2013 Vocal Ableton 9 by DariusX.
Cheers TA's
Darek
Rodri Santos
Does not sound outstanding yet but certainly does not sound bad, vocals seem a bit out of key at points but i think vocals will sit well, i see a good potential i like this kind of "yacht house :D " tunes show me the final version and i will tell you if something needs more work so far... great potential.
evo8
quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
OK guys - just to resurrect this thread a bit I decided to share with you my latest vocal track - still in very early WIP stage but you could definitely hear and feel the direction I'm taking this track through.
At the moment is very dry yet as vocal need to be re-recorded (for now it is only a space reservation to complete structural arrangement).
She found me on SoundCloud and offer an collab on my track preview - so good things will happen with your dedication and persistence :D
So give it a run (it is a private track so you would not find it on SoundCloud):
DCH New Concept MAY 05 2013 Vocal Ableton 9 by DariusX.
Cheers TA's
Darek
normally wouldnt listen to stuff like this but i kinda like it! Has that deadmau5 feel
But i think its a bit heavy in the low-mids in places - if you listen to the radio mix of I Remember you can hear it has more space down there and lets the vocal be more dominant in that range
and yeah, some of the vox are a bit off in places! but overall nice tune! some more work maybe to make it more pleasant on the ears overall and i would listen to it more :)
one more thing :p just at 3:45 if you automate the bass eq leading up to that drop i think the drop will be much nicer - at the moment im not really sure is the track really in at 3:16???
