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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 552)
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| fuxzz |
Anyone here still?
What about this?
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by fuxzz
Anyone here still?
What about this?
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This is really not my cup of tea but what could help you (from listener perspective) achieve higher level of satisfaction is to widen your sounds (at least some of the instruments and/or drums) as of right now this sound a bit flat and centric focus (I can hear that some Fx are pushed to left or right but you would definitely benefit of spreading your sounds more around.
Cheers,
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
Just to add some life to this thread lol I will post my new (3~4hrs) WIP - this is an easy going take on vocal dance genre. What do you think? How everything seats together? How is this bass line? Is sounds balance properly?
Cheers,
Darek |
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| fuxzz |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
This is really not my cup of tea but what could help you (from listener perspective) achieve higher level of satisfaction is to widen your sounds (at least some of the instruments and/or drums) as of right now this sound a bit flat and centric focus (I can hear that some Fx are pushed to left or right but you would definitely benefit of spreading your sounds more around.
Cheers,
Darek |
Thanks. I'll take that into consideration, I've been messing about with the bass so already got a new version going.
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Just to add some life to this thread lol I will post my new (3~4hrs) WIP - this is an easy going take on vocal dance genre. What do you think? How everything seats together? How is this bass line? Is sounds balance properly?
Cheers,
Darek |
Your track sounds clean as always. The bass is good in my opinion. I'm not sure about some of the FX, they are a little too sudden, in lack of a better word.
I can almost hear a big warm pad playing in the background, maybe could be something to ponder. |
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| TranceLover007 |
Just to attract more people/views/responses on this thread lol - my new idea: short but you will get an idea ;)
Cheers,
Darek |
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Just to attract more people/views/responses on this thread lol - my new idea: short but you will get an idea ;)
Cheers,
Darek |
Hey Darek,
So...Liking the track. I especially like how your mids are setting with the sub on this. Not to fond of the guitar licks but that is just personal opinion. I am finding however that those short vocal stabs are really effective and works. |
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| Mel David |
| 🦉 I'm thinking that track should go more disco rather than house. |
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| SystematicX1 |
Different idea I am working on
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| LoveHate |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Just to attract more people/views/responses on this thread lol - my new idea: short but you will get an idea ;)
Cheers,
Darek |
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| gordan100 |
Phil, that sounds clean and solid, i like it
Darius, you sound like pro dude, that is very nice with a lot of details in composition and sound, serious stuff
This is not that serious, rather simple, also no drums yet just kick, also not really happy with bassline. Any potential here or trash bin?
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Phil, that sounds clean and solid, i like it
Darius, you sound like pro dude, that is very nice with a lot of details in composition and sound, serious stuff
This is not that serious, rather simple, also no drums yet just kick, also not really happy with bassline. Any potential here or trash bin?
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Heya Gordan,
So this piece is quite nice. I do not think that there is anything necessarily wrong with the bassline but I do believe you could take on another feel.
As it stands the bass is acting like a stab that triggers on the main down beat. "If", you were to re arrange your note to not hit on the down beat but rather in between the downbeat of your kick following every kick thereafter you may see that you will gain a different type of "groove". This may help you with gaining more swing from your percussion.
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So, this cut is part 8 of a fourth variant attempt ::rolls eyes:: at a track that was initially started three years ago. For some reason I can't seem to ditch it and always come back because I think it has potential. Now, it seems at the very least I am gaining some gel with this. As it stands, this is really just a bed. Still need some top end melody
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| gordan100 |
Thanks Phil, i will try that bass notes rearrangement
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
So, this cut is part 8 of a fourth variant attempt ::rolls eyes:: at a track that was initially started three years ago. For some reason I can't seem to ditch it and always come back because I think it has potential. Now, it seems at the very least I am gaining some gel with this. As it stands, this is really just a bed. Still need some top end melody
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This is a nice drive so far, def worth more developing! |
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