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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 41)
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
I hope I can redeem this one for my comments given earlier :).
It's really rough, but I'd love some feedback on it. |
You always have a nice chocolaty sound. Nice track. Like you say early days, but my suggestion so far is to have more drum variation, and parts where drum is fairly different. |
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| Storyteller |
Good tip. I usually don't do that for anything in a track, but I should. So that's a will do and thanks! :).
Hoping to finish it tonight. Been putting off this remix now since christmas. Got a deadline reminder 2 days ago so time to get cracking. this is about 4hrs of work now. |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
I hope I can redeem this one for my comments given earlier :).
It's really rough, but I'd love some feedback on it. |
I really like it up until the the kinda lead sound comes in at 1 min, then im not sure after that, it would probably grow on me :cool: |
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| evo8 |
summery vibes
p.s. TAL-Bassline-101 get the in!!!
edit: see below for working link |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
I hope I can redeem this one for my comments given earlier :).
It's really rough, but I'd love some feedback on it. |
The hihat that comes in around 15 seconds sticks out to me some. I don't know if it is pitched up too high or not in key but I would look at it again.
I like the organ and strings, and the composition of the overall song. |
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| chris marsh |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
I hope I can redeem this one for my comments given earlier :).
It's really rough, but I'd love some feedback on it. |
Thanks a lot for your feedback
I like the drums and groove a lot - nice deep feel but im with evo on this one - personally not too keen on the pluck/stab sound i think you could make it better from 1 min onwards.
IMO of course
very impressive for 4 hours work tho i get f all done in 4 hours :) |
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| chris marsh |
this is nearly finished now - bass needs more variation and some attention i think but i changed it from the bright fm bass i had before
any more thoughts mix wise, etc
thanks
Chris |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by chris marsh
this is nearly finished now - bass needs more variation and some attention i think but i changed it from the bright fm bass i had before
any more thoughts mix wise, etc
thanks
Chris |
yeah thats it, wouldnt change anything with that really, good job! |
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| Storyteller |
Thanks for all the feedback guys. I'll try and weigh it in wherever applicable.
| quote: | Originally posted by chris marsh
this is nearly finished now - bass needs more variation and some attention i think but i changed it from the bright fm bass i had before
any more thoughts mix wise, etc
thanks
Chris |
I'd kill to make this type of music <3 :) |
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| kevin shawn |
Damn, some really good music in here! Worked on this a bit last week, not sure if it will get finished.
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| Trancelover03591 |
I am really impressed by all of the excellent progressive house productions lately on TA. Haven't seriously worked on a prog track in a while and decided to go that direction. Still just a rough draft at this point and would appreciate any guidance:
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