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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 73)
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| Viber |
My first attempt at Trance, Unicorn Trance.
edit: updated with better sidechain & little fixes. |
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| Juan Paulino |
Sounds good, i like.
Nice Kick |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Viber
I like it, i'm one of those pricks who listen to the dub version of every release so not so sure how much i like female vocals throughout the entire thing but the track itself is real nice imo.
Kinda reminds me of that 2004ish ISOS music that i liked so much, good not too overbearing music.
I like the 2nd track, though that hat is a bit annoying (maybe its just too loud. |
your right, i need to lower the volume of that hat, thanks |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Juan Paulino
Time for breakdown.
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Looks like nobody is willing to take on this WIP from you Juan lol so let be the first one and start with this: at this point I think you have your most promising and interesting concept developed so far (out of so many you posted over here) but there is still a lots of room for improvement (at least from my perspective :D ).
I would start first with this observation -> base line is too loose and wondering too much around your whole WIP. I would either increase loudness of the existing mid-range one (which comes around 0:32) or add additional mid-range one to directly support you low-end one.
Another thing would be to add off-beat snare at 0:55 part - will or should add some nice rhythm (drive) to your track -> you also should do that (add something new to consistently increase this drive/energy) at 1:23 and 1:37 mark.
Not bad at all man !!!
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Viber
My first attempt at Trance, Unicorn Trance.
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Is not really my cup of tea so I can't comment on style and attractiveness of this production but there is definitely something in it which make me listen to this WIP few good times ;) - I think this track could grow to something really cool and interesting !!!
Darek |
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| Viber |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Is not really my cup of tea so I can't comment on style and attractiveness of this production but there is definitely something in it which make me listen to this WIP few good times ;) - I think this track could grow to something really cool and interesting !!!
Darek |
Thanx Darek, your opinion means a lot.:)
Wish we had Sean Tyas on the forum to help me out with this lol |
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| Juan Paulino |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Looks like nobody is willing to take on this WIP from you Juan lol so let be the first one and start with this: at this point I think you have your most promising and interesting concept developed so far (out of so many you posted over here) but there is still a lots of room for improvement (at least from my perspective :D ).
I would start first with this observation -> base line is too loose and wondering too much around your whole WIP. I would either increase loudness of the existing mid-range one (which comes around 0:32) or add additional mid-range one to directly support you low-end one.
Another thing would be to add off-beat snare at 0:55 part - will or should add some nice rhythm (drive) to your track -> you also should do that (add something new to consistently increase this drive/energy) at 1:23 and 1:37 mark.
Not bad at all man !!!
Darek |
Thanks Darek, will take your advice into consideration man! |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Viber
Thanx Darek, your opinion means a lot.:)
Wish we had Sean Tyas on the forum to help me out with this lol |
Lol, you are right, he just vanished one day :stongue:
Darek
I just accidentally found him lol
Sean Tyas |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Juan Paulino
Thanks Darek, will take your advice into consideration man! |
No problem Juan, you can definitely try it out and see if achieve your desired results going this way.
Darek |
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| Richard Butler |
I will give some more feedback shortly but having probs playing SC.
In the meantime here's a lil techno dubby thing - nothing out the ordinary but the kinda groove I like myself.
The main arpy synth is a patch I made in my Roland Fantom, and recorded in live as I twiddled it's knobs.
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| TranceElevation |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I will give some more feedback shortly but having probs playing SC.
In the meantime here's a lil techno dubby thing - nothing out the ordinary but the kinda groove I like myself.
The main arpy synth is a patch I made in my Roland Fantom, and recorded in live as I twiddled it's knobs.
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I like the absence of a clap. And the mood is quite intriguing.
It has tons of space for improvement. The foundations are there, but it needs more color. |
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| Viber |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
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This is not exactly my taste, for me these tracks serve an important purpose: they are the first 1 or 2 tracks being played by Trance\House DJs in order to get the crowd in the mood.
It does need something to differentiate it from other tracks, i wish knew what:) |
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