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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 138)
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
This one is quite cool. Deep dark cave style techno.
Very generic progression and trance sound. Nice mood and vibe though. Maybe spend a bit more time on tightening that mix and you can easily put in some oldschool trance mix :).
I got this one, spent a bit of time on it this morning. Quite generic and can go either way. Some suggestions would be appreciated :). The picture in there is to annoy one of my friends :D.
For some reason I feel like I should stick to the base and keep it simple with maybe some vocal. |
Not much to go on. Sound good from a sound design stand point to me. But it is kinda generic so far. |
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| Storyteller |
Thanks for the feedback on my tiny soundbyte guys! :)
Oof, I love that original track (quickly downloaded the stems just now to remove the forced likes and application access right afterwards). Although I don't think it is quite what they're looking for in the remix competition the track sounds okay. At around the 3:50 mark I do expect more of a climax than I hear now, maybe build some more anticipation and tension there before the climax?
Mixwise I feel the energy that is in the music is absent in the beats. Overall quite well mixed but it just needs more punch in my opinion. |
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| scorpradio |
Overall, I see where your going on this track. I actually dig the groove as it is constant and moving (for the most part).
There are certain areas of the arrangement that stick out in the mix a bit to much imo , but for the most part the mix is solid. There is a slight muddiness to the mix but that could very well be remedied or maybe its your artistic imprint. Either way, it has alot of clean elements.
Nice Work !! |
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| evo8 |
would like the kick to have more thump
@storyteller, not much to go on so hard to judge :-/ |
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| beamrider |
Hi there,
This is a short preview for the latest track I was working on. It's kind of an uplifting/tech/acid stuff.
Any comments will be appreciated
cheers! |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
Thanks for the feedback on my tiny soundbyte guys! :)
Oof, I love that original track (quickly downloaded the stems just now to remove the forced likes and application access right afterwards). Although I don't think it is quite what they're looking for in the remix competition the track sounds okay. At around the 3:50 mark I do expect more of a climax than I hear now, maybe build some more anticipation and tension there before the climax?
Mixwise I feel the energy that is in the music is absent in the beats. Overall quite well mixed but it just needs more punch in my opinion. |
I would be interested to see you do an entry since you like the original, there is still time to enter!
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
Overall, I see where your going on this track. I actually dig the groove as it is constant and moving (for the most part).
There are certain areas of the arrangement that stick out in the mix a bit to much imo , but for the most part the mix is solid. There is a slight muddiness to the mix but that could very well be remedied or maybe its your artistic imprint. Either way, it has alot of clean elements.
Nice Work !! |
I wish the muddiness was a creative decision but it is just a weakness in my mixing/sound design tbh.
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
would like the kick to have more thump
@storyteller, not much to go on so hard to judge :-/ |
I am not very adept at choosing kicks!
Thanks for the feedback guys, kind of confirms my thoughts on the song. Still some weaknesses in my production but with some improvements overall I hope. |
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| Storyteller |
| quote: | Originally posted by Trancelover03591
I would be interested to see you do an entry since you like the original, there is still time to enter! |
Maybe. I don't think the original can be improved much though :D. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
Maybe. I don't think the original can be improved much though :D. |
I thought taking it in a different direction entirely would make remixing it more worthwhile. The contest rule page says they are open to different interpretations. |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by beamrider
Hi there,
This is a short preview for the latest track I was working on. It's kind of an uplifting/tech/acid stuff.
Any comments will be appreciated
cheers! |
your supposed to post feedback on the latest track in the thread before looking for feedback on your own - the rules are on page 1 |
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| beamrider |
didn't know it, BTW page 1 of 138 it's too much to read ;)
I'll give feedback to the last track posted |
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| theterran |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
your supposed to post feedback on the latest track in the thread before looking for feedback on your own - the rules are on page 1 |
Yeah...nobody did that for my track...less hypocrisy in this thread please. Not that I mind...Just silly to get after someone about that.
Simple solution : Don't post any feedback for him. End-of, problem solved. |
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