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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 223)
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| Raphie |
some sound design in progress, want to end up with something tribal / dub techno deep thingy.... not really a song yet, just a jam mixing the elements,finding sweetspots, but you'll get the flavour
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
So, Think it's really catchy, but the execution is not so good, very harsch and metalic sounding, loads of compression, but great arrangement and cheesy anthem. If you would like to collab on this one, happy to do a remix. |
Hey thanks for the feedback. I would be happy for you to work with it! I'll send you a PM. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
I don't recognize it myself. Stylistically it is familiar, but to lots of tracks, not one in particular.
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Quick question
I made this today, but I fear this melody already exists!!
Does it?
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
some sound design in progress, want to end up with something tribal / dub techno deep thingy.... not really a song yet, just a jam mixing the elements,finding sweetspots, but you'll get the flavour
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Cool, I like that supersaw pad type lead. I think the snare could be a little louder. The intro is cool too as different elements come in. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
something a little proggier
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sounds totally bad ass mate. Love this sonic tapestry. |
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| Richard Butler |
This was meant to be deep house but took a bit of a different turn.
How is the mix and everything your end?
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| Andy28 |
@ Caleb.. Pretty much what Raphie said. Great into it draws you straight in, but I start to get lost at 2:30 till 4:00 mins and lose interest.
@ Raphie.. Good idea but everything is sitting too far back in the middle. The bits you do give width sound great as a result of this but I think you really need to open things up a bit, well a lot in fact.
@ Richard.. Can't say I've heard that before, sounds like a really good idea though
@ Evo.. Your drums sound great again, it really is one of your stronger points. Sounds good overall but it needs something else?? I know it has bass, you can hear it but it needs to have more of a pattern/swing/groove to it imo, or even layer some mids to sit on top of it to achieve that.
@ Richard again.. Wasn't expecting this from you lol.. It's not bad actually not my thing at all but worth a listen.. Mix seems alright I guess, the vocal sounds a bit strange but I don't think that has out do to with the mix. The kick could maybe punch more it can get drowned out at places. The bass is quite funky, I'm liking that :) |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
some sound design in progress, want to end up with something tribal / dub techno deep thingy.... not really a song yet, just a jam mixing the elements,finding sweetspots, but you'll get the flavour
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not bad raphie, love those stab chords, they sound really nice
the bass your bring in is really dominating, doesnt leave for much space
your drums are a bit far back for my liking and for me that is way too much reverb on the snare
ill also throw in my usual criticism on here of not liking the kick, its a bit knocky or something
if you just prioritized those chord stabs, reduced the cutoff on the bass so its just there and not completely dominating and also mixed the drums a bit better i think it would be more enjoyable, my 2c :) |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
This was meant to be deep house but took a bit of a different turn.
How is the mix and everything your end?
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love the kick and drums at the start, nice and chunky :)
dont like the vocal at all tho, sorry |
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| Storyteller |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
This was meant to be deep house but took a bit of a different turn.
How is the mix and everything your end?
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The balance in this thing is really great. Sometimes the vocals need a bit more space to stand out imo, but just a little. Overall a very interesting combination of sounds. At certain times the vocal is a bit too much. You've got a brilliant vibe going on though. Would be very interested in a dub version of this. Lovely groove and feel. I do lose my interest after about 2 mins unfortunately. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
This was meant to be deep house but took a bit of a different turn.
How is the mix and everything your end?
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Sounds like you slowly migrating to EDM Richard :) - like what you did in this track so far, different, unique and crafty but for me this starts at 0:30 and pretty much go all the way to the end man. One thing that could make a huge difference in faith of this track is this vocal part which sounded to me as very heavy on treatment lol and this would be fine if is use from time to time as an FX but not (at least for me) as your main vocal element.
:D
Cheer man,
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
Here's mine. I'm not comfortable with it yet for many reasons but I still like it :). It's about Silhouette (Storyteller Remix). Might just be my first release on my own little label to be.
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I still staying by my previous statement about low end and I would like to listen to this WIP without a kick to have better sense of your lows lol but again this track with some seriously craft bass line could be really very danger release this year from you man.
Cheers,
Darek |
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