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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 346)
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| Woony |
Stuck on this loop... |
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| Evolve140 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
not dying about the sample but its nice, would be a nice early track to build into something else |
cool thanks for checking maytee.
pretty satisfied with most of this, but from the feedback i've got so far i'm going to possibly shorten the breakdown and build it a little better tension wise, and try to enhance the energy control when the drop comes back after the break. also some uncertainty about some of the vocal bits because of the acapella itself, 2 different acapella parts in 2 channels, one left and one right, so maybe have to bounce out to mono and L/R it out properly. otherwise pretty happy about how this one turned out. been working with hiphop/R&B vocals for the past 5 or 6 tracks and this is probably the most hiphop infused of them all, house and tech house with a hiphop vibe but not necessarily a ghetto house track at all. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by itsamemario
RULES
1. Post a track, comment on a track.
- That means that if you want to post a track you're working on, you first have to comment on a track.
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Woony
Stuck on this loop... |
welcome to dance music production! :haha: |
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| Woony |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
welcome to dance music production! :haha: |
Well, that's the thing, I usually don't get stuck like most people do. |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Woony
Well, that's the thing, I usually don't get stuck like most people do. |
heres what i do when that happens - delete project and move onto something new.
Can be difficult if you have invested a lot of time in it but...... |
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| Evolve140 |
| yup. Delete + Start Over |
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| kosmotika |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
@MSZ: can't listen anymore
@Seandroid: still nothing to really comment on. Sounds big and well balanced.
@Richard: I agree with Evo8 and MSZ...
I hope I've gathered enough good karma over the past few months to drop this one here. Halfway through the first I noticed I liked another progression too, so the alternate version is more or less the same arrangement doing things a bit differently.
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Nice chill house sound, I really like this one. Hope you finish it! :) I'd add some atmospheric sounds, maybe some breeze and bird calls and the like...makes me think of a rainy day at the beach. |
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| Evolve140 |
| quote: | Originally posted by kosmotika
Nice chill house sound, I really like this one. Hope you finish it! :) I'd add some atmospheric sounds, maybe some breeze and bird calls and the like...makes me think of a rainy day at the beach. |
oo yeah this is good mate. I like the 2nd chord progression more :) |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
cool thanks for checking maytee.
pretty satisfied with most of this, but from the feedback i've got so far i'm going to possibly shorten the breakdown and build it a little better tension wise, and try to enhance the energy control when the drop comes back after the break. also some uncertainty about some of the vocal bits because of the acapella itself, 2 different acapella parts in 2 channels, one left and one right, so maybe have to bounce out to mono and L/R it out properly. otherwise pretty happy about how this one turned out. been working with hiphop/R&B vocals for the past 5 or 6 tracks and this is probably the most hiphop infused of them all, house and tech house with a hiphop vibe but not necessarily a ghetto house track at all. |
I wish I could sound as good as this! |
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| Richard Butler |
A house track you can download if you wish
Feat a rapper called New5ense
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| Evolve140 |
| it's kinda cool but the leads and synths and stuff sound pretty rushed, like cheesy but major preset sounds. no offense it just sounds kind of forced. |
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