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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 436)
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
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Agree with Richard man, first part is really cool and interesting with grabbing/driving vibe in it, so if you improve your break and second part you may have a winner on the hand Erik.
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
This is as good as I can make. Hope to get it released
Any issues guys?
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Interesting idea and well delivered Richard , I hope you will be able to release it ;) - my $0.02 if you don't mind would be to work on your kick as right now is a bit too woody for my taste :D
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
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This is really good man, House with nicely blended Industrial elements - pretty sweet, nothing to complain about (a bit to short but you have everything what you need for release material) ;)
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
This is as good as I can make. Hope to get it released
Any issues guys?
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I like it Rich. Cool voice. Nice sounds overall. I think you could make longer part starting at 2:15, and make a nice break there. |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
I decided to add a bit more melodic development to this WIP:
Darek |
Very nice groovy track Darek |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
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First part is awesome, like others have said already, break could be nicer... Like the bass, and overall new wave electro pop sound. |
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| gordan100 |
Didn't touch the structure yet, it's just a new mix.
How very far am i from some acceptable quality :) ?
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Didn't touch the structure yet, it's just a new mix.
How very far am i from some acceptable quality :) ?
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A restful quality here. Drums need work Im afraid buddy |
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| Richard Butler |
This came from inspiration from listening to Evos last
Just a WIP
Is it going anywhere?
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
This came from inspiration from listening to Evos last
Just a WIP
Is it going anywhere?
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I like it Rich, it def goes somewhere. That hat is to strong or sharp imo. |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
This came from inspiration from listening to Evos last
Just a WIP
Is it going anywhere?
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sorry mate the dissonant chords are kinda spoiling it for me, not sure on the vocal either its very loud |
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| gordan100 |
This is probably best i can do... also, i don't want to listen this track for some time :). Need for an ear flushing.
Tried to separate sounds, but don't know with how much success. Bass string is pretty wide, it's sidechained on kick but still... if i cut his envelope then there is not enough power. I've raise mid on hook part, but it's still loose some volume when everything hit at once.
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