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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 491)
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| MSZ |
if you had a gangnam style parody video, you'd be a billionaire. |
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| MSZ |
maybe this is too noisy |
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| SystematicX1 |
Richard,
IMHO on this particular track, the Vox cut does not work, unlike some of your others. And personally, I do not think it is needed any way.
On the other side, I really really like this and as it seems we all are taking a retro feel in our music as of late, it is very appropriate and catchy. I really like the movement in your composition and really great arrangement tones.
I for sure want to see this fully developed and possibly a new favorite from you.
If there was anything that I could critique well there was one area.
Curious. Is this track in mono? It seems narrow in the mix. |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by MSZ
maybe this is too noisy |
It is a bit imo, but has nice chords and progression, it's worth to play more with this |
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| gordan100 |
| @Richard - was listening both of your tracks few days ago, didn't comment anything cause tbh didn't really like neither. I've heard crazy nice and creative tracks from you but these are not among them imo |
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| TranceLover007 |
What happened man - a jazzy vibe you are working on lol - net bad at all, just need more theme development, maybe a piano or synth going with some catchy melody and at least one break with chords changes to add some variation and attractiveness ;)
Also noted that your levels are more set and mixing is improved quite a bit.
Darek
Here is my another chillout WIP
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| gordan100 |
Thanks Darek, it wasn't intentional jazzy, it just happened that way
This wip of yours is nice and sounds good, but tbh nothing memorable imho, i liked some of your prev chill tracks more than this one. |
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| MSZ |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
What happened man - a jazzy vibe you are working on lol - net bad at all, just need more theme development, maybe a piano or synth going with some catchy melody and at least one break with chords changes to add some variation and attractiveness ;)
Also noted that your levels are more set and mixing is improved quite a bit.
Darek
Here is my another chillout WIP
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theres something about that slap bass that is not sitting well for me, think something to do with the pitch(maybe tuned too flat?), but nice work.
i've been wrestling this wip for a while, not making much progress maybe slowly inching forward. the mix is off, not sure how im going to sequence it or keep it. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by MSZ
theres something about that slap bass that is not sitting well for me, think something to do with the pitch(maybe tuned too flat?), but nice work.
i've been wrestling this wip for a while, not making much progress maybe slowly inching forward. the mix is off, not sure how im going to sequence it or keep it. |
Thanks Mac for taking your time and listen to my WIP - as far as this "slap" bass line statement, I will have to check it out because there is two of those basses working together (one is flat one) and the balance may be shifted a bit out of proportion, thanks :D
Going back to your WIP - how wide is your bass, did you freq shift some of those freq?
Cheers,
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
..... but tbh nothing memorable imho....... |
Appreciate your comment man :) - any suggestion what memorable element/s would you like to hear in this WIP?
Cheers,
Darek |
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