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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 247)
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| Domesty |
| quote: | Originally posted by Seandroid
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Great track! It has the darkish vibe, but at the same time maintains the "easy going" catergory. Maybe you could also experiment with vocal chops over some parts?
Nevertheless top notch track!
Your backing vocals 3:02-> sounds awesome! How many takes it takes for you to get your backing vocals sound great?
| quote: | Originally posted by madmuso
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As scorpradio said it kinda feels like two songs. One thing to point out the kick loses it "boominess" at 6:16-> perhaps some limiting issue as the plucks are pretty wide and loud. I really dig that melody. So you could build around that?
Here is one of my older stuff, i might actually finish this. I'll propably rework the entire intro part. Especially the drums. The lead which starts the buildup will come to play on the chorus too.
Those pops are from bittersweet as i have widened high chord lead. these pops dont seem to appear on the arrangement though? |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by Seandroid
This is actually an older track by me that I decided to revisit to get it to be release quality. I re-recorded the verse and shortened the track by like 3 minutes. Worked out pretty well. Still have some work to do on the vocals I think but yeah! |
spanking good track mate, no crits |
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| Richard Butler |
So here's a dub mix of this track 'Are u' I've been working non
Transitions and vocals need more work.
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| Mise |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
So here's a dub mix of this track 'Are u' I've been working non
Transitions and vocals need more work.
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The low end is missing and a sustained sub could help. The percussion is working very well.
I hope that helps. |
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| Evolve140 |
first track since my break in november. enjoy :)
feedback welcome as usual and questions welcome
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Domesty
Here is one of my older stuff, i might actually finish this. I'll propably rework the entire intro part. Especially the drums. The lead which starts the buildup will come to play on the chorus too.
Those pops are from bittersweet as i have widened high chord lead. these pops dont seem to appear on the arrangement though? |
I would take first 30 sec of this WIP and work with it - must say that this is really sweet concept with massive potential ;)
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Seandroid
This is actually an older track by me that I decided to revisit to get it to be release quality. I re-recorded the verse and shortened the track by like 3 minutes. Worked out pretty well. Still have some work to do on the vocals I think but yeah! |
Sean, this could be very strong track if you some how could add a 16 or maybe 32 bars with a massive lead playing some sweet melody over your existing morphing bass lines - this would create this really moving and driving melodic vibe which is the only one missing from this beauty :D - my $0.02
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
This is the complete vocal stem,dry. I am contemplating reworking the song and may have to use less vocal than I wanted {I swear this vocal stem sounds like someone is doing something in the background}
At any rate....I sincerely appreciate the assistance and feedback from all of you.
I also agree with a lot of your comments.
I do think the drop deserves more attention. Maybe a SC/Compress on the bass?
I also feel it needs some high frequency influence in there. I am envisioning a sort of pulsy driving stab kind of groove...now I just gotta do it
/sigh why don't they just make helmets that let us get our musical thoughts from our brain on to our daw
Vox by Systematicx1 on Mixcloud |
Did you try to upload your vocal ? - can't get it to rum lol ???
Darek |
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| scorpradio |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
first track since my break in november. enjoy :)
feedback welcome as usual and questions welcome
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As I always judge and strive to achieve is production quality. You already seem to know how something should sound clean in a mix. Keep that up man. Seems only a little polishing is all you need.
Good sense of bass
If I could critique this piece I would encourage to build more swing to your percussion elements. Use different timing methods but build swing.
In other words,give it a groove =OP
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| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Did you try to upload your vocal ? - can't get it to rum lol ???
Darek |
Darek,
Sorry man...corrected!
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
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Darek,
Sorry man...corrected!
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From my first run sounds like this is the music she is recording to lol and someone already was trying to do volume automation this problem but didn't do a good job. You could clean it up more by doing it again (volume automation) and see if this is not going to bite too much out of your vocal quality.
Cheers man,
Darek |
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| scorpradio |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
From my first run sounds like this is the music she is recording to lol and someone already was trying to do volume automation this problem but didn't do a good job. You could clean it up more by doing it again (volume automation) and see if this is not going to bite too much out of your vocal quality.
Cheers man,
Darek |
THANK YOU!! I thought I was going crazy
Yea, thinking the same thing. This is an awful stem and will probably just minimizing the amount of vocal in the track. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
THANK YOU!! I thought I was going crazy
Yea, thinking the same thing. This is an awful stem and will probably just minimizing the amount of vocal in the track. |
Here is the original steam (from vocalist) which I was ask to create remix from - you can see that if you have great stem your job is much more easy lol and you can be really creative. This original track was a trance one in 140 bpm lol.
Cheers,
Darek |
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