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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 222)
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
Here's mine. I'm not comfortable with it yet for many reasons but I still like it :). It's about Silhouette (Storyteller Remix). Might just be my first release on my own little label to be.
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I like the sound design and atmosphere, but that is pretty standard of your productions as you are experienced and skilled. It isn't that memorable or creative to me musically at this point, just a quality track production wise. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Right, here we go then. This is going to take absolutely stupid amount of work to get finished, especially because I'm experimenting with some things I've never used before. It'll probably end up being several different parts. |
Cool. Very intro track sounding. A lot of nice touches in the track. It will be interesting to see the direction of the rest of the song. |
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| evo8 |
something a little proggier
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
something a little proggier
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Really like the atmosphere you create in tracks and all the small details. I wish I had better feedback than I think it is a great start and look forward to hearing it finished but that is what I got! |
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| Trancelover03591 |
So you're going to have to head over to the Dutch, Swedes & Friends arena for this one. My goal is melodic, catchy, radio friendly.
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Trancelover03591
So you're going to have to head over to the Dutch, Swedes & Friends arena for this one. My goal is melodic, catchy, radio friendly.
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production isnt bad, could be tightened up here and there, its just for me the melodies arent that catchy but i can see what u were going for |
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| Teezdalien |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
something a little proggier
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This is tight. Would like to hear how you build it to this point and also see where you take it, but great stuff as usual. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by Trancelover03591
So you're going to have to head over to the Dutch, Swedes & Friends arena for this one. My goal is melodic, catchy, radio friendly.
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Getting there mate. I mess about with this style (never put on here though) and I think you need slightly better melody work and a bigger sound and more regular changes to be radio friendly.
A great step in the right direction. |
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| Richard Butler |
Quick question
I made this today, but I fear this melody already exists!!
Does it?
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| Raphie |
Sounds very familiair/predictable can't name the track, but i can hum along instantly
Try shazam |
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| Raphie |
| quote: | Originally posted by Trancelover03591
So you're going to have to head over to the Dutch, Swedes & Friends arena for this one. My goal is melodic, catchy, radio friendly.
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So, Think it's really catchy, but the execution is not so good, very harsch and metalic sounding, loads of compression, but great arrangement and cheesy anthem. If you would like to collab on this one, happy to do a remix. |
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| Raphie |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
Good production on this, I does not sound overcompressed to me whatsoever. As said earlier a tad generic/dated sound selection. With
Here's mine. I'm not comfortable with it yet for many reasons but I still like it :). It's about Silhouette (Storyteller Remix). Might just be my first release on my own little label to be.
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like it after 1min, starts to drag me into the vibe, enough low end here, but kick is a bit floaty, could be good, though i would like the sound design a bit more seperated and 3d it still sounds a bit bland |
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