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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 364)
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| gordan100 |
Didn't change the bass after all, no inspiration... if someone have a good idea please send it to me :)
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| LoveHate |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Didn't change the bass after all, no inspiration... if someone have a good idea please send it to me :)
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i think this would be even greater if you added some vox or chopped up vocals as an effect or something, im getting an enigma vibe , other than that yeah i think you have all of the elements already
some ethereal vocals would be cool though
and thank you for the comment on my track ! |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by LoveHate
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meant to comment earlier, the mixing is pretty good, vocal maybe a tad loud
not a fan of the rhythm in this one but thats just me |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Woony
Reminds me of old twinkly prog a bit. Love the loop but no idea how I'd develop it into a full track. |
you gotta move past that stage!
its a nice little loop, personally would love one of those big deep brooding basslines underneath, maybe some chord stabs here and there later, keep it simple :) |
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| LoveHate |
thanks @evo8 yeah i admit the percussion's were a bit rushed compared to everything else, i can make it better.
| quote: | Originally posted by Woony
Reminds me of old twinkly prog a bit. Love the loop but no idea how I'd develop it into a full track. |
this is real good, listening to some tracks in a similar vain might be good for suggestions on where to take it.
sort of reminds me of d'julz - not what u thought
modulation and little changes go a long way thinking about tension and release |
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| LoveHate |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
i dont even know what this is, tech-house? just an idea right now...
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i had this no repeat for awhile now, peak time techno track?
very pig & dan ish.... |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by LoveHate
i had this no repeat for awhile now, peak time techno track?
very pig & dan ish.... |
pig & dan..jesus, I've a long way to go to reach their standards! -im in the middle of finishing this track off (or ing it up), will post the finished one |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by NeedleBear
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yeah, this isnt bad at the start, nice and techy, your keeping it simple enough which is good
1:30 - that lead arp is a little bit loud, kinda dominates a bit too much, your drums/bassline kinda lose a little bit of power as a result - remember, everything is relative in the mix... |
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| evo8 |
MSZ has made me put my trance pants on :p
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| NeedleBear |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
yeah, this isnt bad at the start, nice and techy, your keeping it simple enough which is good
1:30 - that lead arp is a little bit loud, kinda dominates a bit too much, your drums/bassline kinda lose a little bit of power as a result - remember, everything is relative in the mix... |
Ah yes your are correct in that matter, Is it alright to let in some lows if your using higher notes?, that what I did with the arp and your right it is dominating, I thought I'd let in some warmth by doing it, ok so i'll cut more. |
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| LoveHate |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
MSZ has made me put my trance pants on :p
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this ing beautiful , im taking tips here. |
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