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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 204)
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| JPaulizle |
Damn thats like van dyk right there. Soo the hook is when you want to change bass right in between the climax just like in the track... ok i get what you're saying. Yeah I like it alright. Thanks man.
You guys are farther than me and don't have key problems like me. Well since i'm goood now everything is getting finished. |
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| Richard Butler |
There's something I've mentioned to you several times but I feel like the comment has not sunk in with you yet.
On the mix side I think you are better than me, your overall mix IMO is decent, so that's one major plus, but the point you seem not to be taking on board is that you are making a FILM BACKGROUND WITH A DRUM BEAT.
That's I think what you need to keep in mind for your next project - if it starts sounding like a static film background (basic ambient type background) with a drum on top, you need to stop right there.
Hope this helps!
I realise btw my techno stuff is very samey but that's a deliberate intent for when people are at 3am bombing away in some Berlin club under the railway arches, it's not supposed to be melodic or particularly hooky in an obvious sense, it's meant to be more like something primeval akin to the experience tribes might have had when zoned out to a load of bongo drumming. |
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| JPaulizle |
| but that what I wanna do Richard, its not meant to be dancy. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by JPaulizle
but that what I wanna do Richard, its not meant to be dancy. |
Ah, gotcha mate, sorry I didn't realise that. |
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| Richard Butler |
So I've updated this one.
Is the break a bore?
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| TranceElevation |
| Didn't listen the whole thing, but as the other time what I didn't like is the low end. Too light and shy. It's immediately noticable (that's not a good sign). I think it should be tighter and punchier. Sounds wrong to me. I'd understand if this was some atmospheric piece where the melody and overall mood was leading...but here, this seem like a piece you should dance to. |
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| Innocence Lost |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceElevation
I should be arrested for that soulless clap.
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Alright my thoughts, remove those sticks, its interfering with the kick. How about some Subass, although Mid bass is nice. Overall Mix down is good and clear. Open high hat fits nnicely. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceElevation
Didn't listen the whole thing, but as the other time what I didn't like is the low end. Too light and shy. It's immediately noticable (that's not a good sign). I think it should be tighter and punchier. Sounds wrong to me. I'd understand if this was some atmospheric piece where the melody and overall mood was leading...but here, this seem like a piece you should dance to. |
Good call, I'm working hard on it and hopefully will deliver something better shortly. |
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| Richard Butler |
QUESTION - I did not want to start a thread for this;
Which soundcloud upgraded version allows you to replace one track version with another so I don't have to always delete a WIP and start over each time?
I checked their blub but could not find this out. |
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| Storyteller |
| All of their paid packages do. :) |
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| AlphaStarred |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Which soundcloud upgraded version allows you to replace one track version with another so I don't have to always delete a WIP and start over each time? |
From what I understand, there is only one Soundcloud that automatically updates itself. All you have to do is click on the edit icon and then click on "Replace file."
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
All of their paid packages do. :) |
You can't replace files with a free version? |
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