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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by sylvannas
Thanks a lot for the feedback :)
Are you talking about the drum sample I used? |
Just snare specifically. |
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| deegee |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
So the feedback I got on this caused me to try and make something more atmospheric, I hope I've pulled it off.
Any mix issues - bass too wooden for example? Maybe this bass no longer suits this changed track?
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I'm not sure about the little kick rolls sprinkled here and there--you've got this sexy, funky, sweaty vibe going on (and loving the retro 80's huge snare hits) and then there's this sort of brrrrrp and the groove disappears for a moment. Only noticed because I was listening while cleaning and dancing, kept surprising my feet but not in a fun way.
The structure of the drop around 2:40 is top notch. Excellent use of the drop into silence thing, while making it sound fresh and new. A+ |
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| deegee |
| quote: | Originally posted by Seandroid
After getting my computer fixed, I think I'm finally done this. |
when is this going to be available to listen? I keep having to dig through this thread just to hear it. |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
So the feedback I got on this caused me to try and make something more atmospheric, I hope I've pulled it off.
Any mix issues - bass too wooden for example? Maybe this bass no longer suits this changed track?
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this is nice kinda chillout track, i would be inclined to smooth off the vocal a bit more but that would be personal choice |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
some more development, bit deeper grooves, again live, but trying out the grooves for laying out the tracks. pretty happy with the groove now, loads of subtile details, just need to work on the flow.
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to me it sounds like what it is...a jam :) so thats fine. im thinking that a lot of the sounds are a bit too wet - maybe keep some elements dry or really short room reverb to have more contrast? |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by sylvannas
Guess I posted it in the wrong section earlier. What do you guys think?? |
hi there
please follow the thread rules by firstly posting some feedback on the previous track (or tracks) posted before yours. :)
love everything about your track except that snare, its too brash for the track, bit of EQ might help, my 2c :) |
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| sylvannas |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
hi there
please follow the thread rules by firstly posting some feedback on the previous track (or tracks) posted before yours. :)
love everything about your track except that snare, its too brash for the track, bit of EQ might help, my 2c :) |
Thank you. Will follow the rules from now on(returning after a long time) !! |
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| Richard Butler |
I've tried to even out the vocals and remove most of those machine gun kicks, also made lots of other changes, harmony's (some of u will not like these) etc, I think I'm done.
Feedback as ever has been invaluable. Makes me realise how confident some producers are that do not require this process.
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I've tried to even out the vocals and remove most of those machine gun kicks, also made lots of other changes, harmony's (some of u will not like these) etc, I think I'm done.
Feedback as ever has been invaluable. Makes me realise how confident some producers are that do not require this process.
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I liked the previos version also, but this is even better. Vocal sounds more natural, and removing the gun kicks is a good idea. |
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| Innocence Lost |
| quote: | Originally posted by sylvannas
Thank you. Will follow the rules from now on(returning after a long time) !! |
Your track is really nice man, something I would listen to in the car or at home. Technically it sounds good and even on my setup, cheers. |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
This is actualy pretty cool and different and I enjoy the overall sound. The main leed is a bit too omnipresent, maybe replace it with something else here n there. |
Thank you Richard! Your'e right about main lead, i'll try to do something with that... |
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| deegee |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I've tried to even out the vocals and remove most of those machine gun kicks, also made lots of other changes, harmony's (some of u will not like these) etc, I think I'm done.
Feedback as ever has been invaluable. Makes me realise how confident some producers are that do not require this process.
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oh wow, yes. killing those kicks and smoothing out the vocals has really made this something deep and sleazy and funky. A++++++++
Also, I'm sure everyone has people listen to their tracks, they just don't do it so publicly. |
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