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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 537)
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| gordan100 |
Is this boring or what? Well, at least mix is not that bad as usual :)
This is version with different kick and bass
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| SystematicX1 |
I like the second version better, it seems more suited.
I would say for the first version that the distorted bass that you used was pretty funky. Pop that up with a different kick and progression/tempo and you could really hit a nice groovy tone |
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| Hides in Shadow |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
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Yeah, go with 2nd version, no complaints here...
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
I am so up and down on this track. Almost ditched it and am trying to work it out and it "seems" like there is an improvement. Undecided if I want to keep that kick
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Phil, I would still work on it as I believe this track has lots of potentials but you over doing your high-end and this is why your whole energy (dynamics) is not there anymore - try to find the right balance in freq before you will move on to the other part of your track.
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
It has been some time for me to post anything over here but I'm still producing and having fun with it lol - my latest WIP (some part of the track) which I'm currently working on (one of few lol). This production is more on Electro-EDM side:
Cheers,
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
Couples of Nu-Funk/Disco ideas in work also lol - I know that this should be more on Trance side but at the moment I have few concepts from different styles lol
Bothe of those ideas require some more development and tweaking with EQ lol - have fun guys.
Cheers,
Darek |
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
It has been some time for me to post anything over here but I'm still producing and having fun with it lol - my latest WIP (some part of the track) which I'm currently working on (one of few lol). This production is more on Electro-EDM side:
Cheers,
Darek |
Uh...yea! seriously, yea! This had my head movin right from the get go.
Still got it D! ::nudge nudge:: |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
Uh...yea! seriously, yea! This had my head movin right from the get go.
Still got it D! ::nudge nudge:: |
Thanks Phil, it is funny how some time everything just turn right man lol - at the beginning I never know what kind of track I will come up with but usually my first step is to get some basic drums loops going on and then work on melodic chords progression with slowly adjusting BPM till everything sounds just right for me :D - it is some goofy way (for some) but I like to work that way man, also right from start I'm paying extra attention to balance and dynamics.
Cheers,
Darek |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
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Your Nu-Funk/Disco tracks are nice. This one is very nice, i have really enjoyed listening.
For me that dance thing (DCH Blank Startup File2) goes too much on a cheesy side later |
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| gordan100 |
It's a cover of Felix track i guess
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
It's a cover of Felix track i guess
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So, it seems to my ears that there is a big stereo separation issue.
Almost like everything is panned odd.
Dig the concept, very airy and atmospheric. The vocal shot seems like it has a bit to much delay or verb on it. I'd actually suggest going mono on that as it seems to conflict with the already stereo'd out harmonics.
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Working this little chill d&b track in about 20 minutes. Haven't done much but think it has some potential.
Needs some mids for sure and will probably throw in a hook somewhere
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