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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 113)
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| The Dark NINJA |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ RANN
Dude, what the is with all the alts?
Urban Ninja, Juan Paulino, Ortofon Child etc? I don't give too much for a other than it's gets a little confusing to see who is posting what, but you know it's grounds for an IP ban right? That means no more TA. |
I'm starting to leave TA for good before that happens. I don't care man. I mess around cause ruckuses here and it can destroy me. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Vancouver
Sorry I have not been around as much as I would like lately. I am in the north of Canada working in the oil patch. takes most of my time. I still managed to Hammer this track out on a few nightshifts tho.
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Depending on what your going for I think the sound design could be updated. Some of the elements remind me of 'house' music currently, but the sound design doesn't match to me. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by The Dark NINJA
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I think the sound design and mixing are OK. It is unique but it doesn't interest me too much. From scanning through it seems to have some psy, progressive, trance, even more ambient at the end and all in one track, which is cool but it has to blend right. I don't care much for repetitive samples like the talking in the background. Once or twice can be really cool, but I don't think it is usually as effective playing through out the whole song. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Hoping to finish this in time for raphies deadline.
Any thoughts before I finish?
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This sounds really good to me both the engineering side of things and the music side. I am hearing a lot of 80's/synthpop type influences in this song. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
Not been making much trance lately, but that is the direction this song took. Any feedback is appreciated:
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| chris marsh |
| quote: | Originally posted by The Dark NINJA
I'm starting to leave TA for good before that happens. I don't care man. I mess around cause ruckuses here and it can destroy me. |
you dont half talk some pooh sometimes my friend :) |
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| Vancouver |
| quote: | Originally posted by Trancelover03591
Not been making much trance lately, but that is the direction this song took. Any feedback is appreciated:
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Epic tune. Loved it. Good work |
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| Richard Butler |
| trancelover I like the melodies, clean bass and percs but I'd say clap could be a bit loud (especially at low volume on my pc speakers)and I did think perhaps you can emphasise the warmth in the pads a bit as it's a little shrill - but as ever this is a taste call so not objective and thus feel free to ignore me, old chum. |
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| jf2010 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Vancouver
Sorry I have not been around as much as I would like lately. I am in the north of Canada working in the oil patch. takes most of my time. I still managed to Hammer this track out on a few nightshifts tho.
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Cool track! Really enjoyed that, very fresh sounding loved the melodies. Only thing i can say is that in places it sounds like there is either too much reverb or else that clap(or white noise thing sounding in the back) is a bit too loud might make it sound tighter if you lower or eq that, great track tho |
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| jf2010 |
New track here would be great to get some feedback, starts off a bit techy then into trance ,nice one
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| Domesty |
| quote: | Originally posted by Trancelover03591
Not been making much trance lately, but that is the direction this song took. Any feedback is appreciated:
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Classic stuff! Sometimes the saws are little too ripping for me though ;D but enjoyed it!
| quote: | Originally posted by jf2010
New track here would be great to get some feedback, starts off a bit techy then into trance ,nice one
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Great picece! To my ears it sounds lil squished by compression/maximixzing though. Just a lil too loud mb.
This stuff is still solid!
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As xmas is around the corner and home with family and all that jazz, i had some time too play around and today i got started with this. Just a short loop, as put together today, but how does the mix sound so far? |
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| TranceElevation |
| quote: | Originally posted by jf2010
New track here would be great to get some feedback, starts off a bit techy then into trance ,nice one
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Giuseppe Ottaviani style.
The track is too monoish. Spread it out, open it, make it breath. Low end is ok.
Adjust the attack of the pad. Is too abrupt and noticable.
But you definitely got a sense of a rhythm. And that's not a detail. Is actually the foundation of any edm producer who aspires to become something. You can be the best engineer/mixer, but without that it remains aesthetics. |
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