Here is a remix I just did. Any advice? tips? criticism?
Raphie
going back to so warm organic house/trance groove
very much WIP but just laid down a few of the elements to see whether the vibe gells or not :D
Seandroid
So is this the part where the thread derails and nobody posts advice anymore, or? That's like 3 in a row now lol.
Dj_Kile
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Originally posted by Seandroid
So is this the part where the thread derails and nobody posts advice anymore, or? That's like 3 in a row now lol.
:whip: ...i'll go first
Dj_Kile
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Originally posted by Vancouver
Here is a remix I just did. Any advice? tips? criticism?
I like the intro, very promising
I'm not warming up to the string that comes ~"00:52" (the main string)
if you insist on using it, maybe try add some filtering phases (open/close)
add some open hats, some percussion to changing it up (adds to the groove)
Dj_Kile
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Originally posted by Raphie
going back to so warm organic house/trance groove
very much WIP but just laid down a few of the elements to see whether the vibe gells or not :D
Hey Raphie, long time man, used to follow your WIPs posts closely
anyway, the dry snare works well with the strings you have in there
the bass changes are interesting, maybe see if you can open the filter on that bass once is changes up and close it back, maybe while adding some distortion
the rests sounds very nice, i like it
TranceLover007
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Originally posted by Dj_Kile
Hi guys, been a while since I've been active
I've been into Psy for a while now, been working on this track
for a while, it's a remix ...not final master
this one is 11 rms , the final one is 8rms
what you think ?
It is actually a cool work man, still have some polishing to do but overall good concept and quite interesting delivery. I'm still missing some typical melodic chords with cutoff filters on it, sweeping throughout this whole entire track + possibly more different type of effects on your massive amount FX (like glitching or stuttering if you know what I mean?) to make this whole listening experience more interesting - just my $0.02.
Cheers,
Darek
TranceLover007
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Originally posted by Vancouver
Here is a remix I just did. Any advice? tips? criticism?
Like the way your intro is constructed my friend (as Dj_Kile mention in his replay already) but after that I can't get a grip of the vibe in this entire track (or if you want to call it a "riff") + some sound choices could benefit from slight adjustment to their own characteristic. If I would have to judge this production strictly how it is right now I wouldn't be able to give you high score for it base on the fact that this melodic idea couldn't really stick with me (but I know that you are not far from creating something really sweet man).
Sorry I couldn't be more helpful but this is my honest opinion on your work at the moment.
Cheers,
Darek
TranceLover007
It is just a WIP for vocal recording so I will have to completely rely on your artistic imagination as in the future a soft female voice will be a big part of this track/song. Another thing is that some of the transitions or parts of this track will be definitely polish and massage much more then it is right now :D
Give it a run and tell me if this melodic development is catching your attention ;)
Cheers,
Darek
DariusX - "LOVE PERCEPTION" (WIP for Vocal Recording) by DariusX.
DJ RANN
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Originally posted by Dj_Kile
Hi guys, been a while since I've been active
I've been into Psy for a while now, been working on this track
for a while, it's a remix ...not final master
this one is 11 rms , the final one is 8rms
what you think ?
Daaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnggg man, long time! Welcome back. See they all come back to TA eventually ;)
This actually reminds me of the of the deeper prog I'd get when buying records in Germany or Switzerland, and I miss it. The mix is good and the eq'ing tight. I think my only criticism is that nearly all the ounds have some kind of modulation on them, be it in the sounds themselves or as FX. I think that;s the sound anyway but just simply for my preference, I'd love to hear more of that drive you've captured (via the groove) just speak for itself. Good work though
:)
Dj_Kile
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
It is actually a cool work man, still have some polishing to do but overall good concept and quite interesting delivery. I'm still missing some typical melodic chords with cutoff filters on it, sweeping throughout this whole entire track + possibly more different type of effects on your massive amount FX (like glitching or stuttering if you know what I mean?) to make this whole listening experience more interesting - just my $0.02.
Cheers,
Darek
yea lot's of Fx in there, many from the original track, and some I've added, I tried not to overload keep it also bit dry
definitely there is a place for some atmosphere line to run through
and some typical prog psy fx/glitches, yea
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Originally posted by DJ RANN
Daaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnggg man, long time! Welcome back. See they all come back to TA eventually ;)
This actually reminds me of the of the deeper prog I'd get when buying records in Germany or Switzerland, and I miss it. The mix is good and the eq'ing tight. I think my only criticism is that nearly all the ounds have some kind of modulation on them, be it in the sounds themselves or as FX. I think that;s the sound anyway but just simply for my preference, I'd love to hear more of that drive you've captured (via the groove) just speak for itself. Good work though
:)
Hey Rann, yea man hard to forget about this place
Thanks for the feedback, lot's of Fx in this track as TranceLover007 mentioned, the most important thing for me was the mood and the drive
There were some sounds that i had to use from the original track which sounds way different
evo8
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Originally posted by Seandroid
So is this the part where the thread derails and nobody posts advice anymore, or? That's like 3 in a row now lol.
there are a few repeat offenders as well if you watch...
