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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 221)
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| AlphaStarred |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
...hoping for the right kick but i dont like it, dont like the attack of it |
My thoughts as well, also digging the experimental intro, but I think the kick could use some work. |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| Details such as sub bass levels and the kick aren't really important at this point. Those things will be tweaked when everything else has found its place. The track has already taken several leaps forward since that sample. |
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| Teezdalien |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
I see our sonical interests are going into a somewhat similar direction. I just listened to that Beacon track you had in Soundcloud and loved it. |
Cheers. There's still a few aspects that need work. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
Here's mine. I'm not comfortable with it yet for many reasons but I still like it :). It's about Silhouette (Storyteller Remix). Might just be my first release on my own little label to be.
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nice sounds and flow mate, great for that deep late vibe but I would perhaps look at the toms sounds as they are a little standard. |
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| Richard Butler |
Prepare for cheese!
This is for a football team and fans. The vocals are worked out but not added yet.
Any input you can give me so far? Imagine big vocals in much of the track.
DOES IT NEED GLICHY BITS?
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Prepare for cheese!
This is for a football team and fans. The vocals are worked out but not added yet.
Any input you can give me so far? Imagine big vocals in much of the track.
DOES IT NEED GLICHY BITS?
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cheese alright! your kick has no punch at all |
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| Richard Butler |
Ta Evo, I see what you mean.
REQUEST;
Do you guys mind giving my mates track here a quick listen?
It's as far from EDM as one can get, it's for a space presentation seminar. He just wonders what people think of it.
Just after 1.15 is some interesting melodic work I think.
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Prepare for cheese!
This is for a football team and fans. The vocals are worked out but not added yet.
Any input you can give me so far? Imagine big vocals in much of the track.
DOES IT NEED GLICHY BITS?
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And when I was ready for your cheese, then I got this:
Oops, we couldn't find that track :D |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Ta Evo, I see what you mean.
REQUEST;
Do you guys mind giving my mates track here a quick listen?
It's as far from EDM as one can get, it's for a space presentation seminar. He just wonders what people think of it.
Just after 1.15 is some interesting melodic work I think.
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Smooth, peaceful, clean, interesting sound choices and very pleasant to listen - I would suggest to check this guy as for years he is working on the similar style of the music and is quite popular on SoundCloud:
Translunar |
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| deegee |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Right, here we go then. This is going to take absolutely stupid amount of work to get finished, especially because I'm experimenting with some things I've never used before. It'll probably end up being several different parts. |
(except for the kick) I am loving absolutely everything about this. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Right, here we go then. This is going to take absolutely stupid amount of work to get finished, especially because I'm experimenting with some things I've never used before. It'll probably end up being several different parts. |
OK Nik you just set yourself up for this lol - I assume this is going to be much longer then 3 min and (as you said before) will have load of stuff added to it -> because this type of music will definitely need that kind of (experimental) sounds and lots of FX.
Sounds like your structures is slowly evolving and direction where you wont to take this track to is definitely defined.
Like what you are creating so far and with a bit work on your kick (doesn't coexist with bass properly yet) could be really interesting concept worth of buying it.
Just my $0.02
Darek |
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| Mr.Mystery |
Right now there's an ambient section starting from 8 minutes :p
I'm not sure if that gets in the final product. |
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