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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 244)
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| Innocence Lost |
| Because there isn't a main climax? lmao! |
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| Storyteller |
| Okay how about this. You're the WIP, stuck in a rut and offended by advice that might be harsh. However, it is given with the right intentions and the way it seems is as if you continuously choose to ignore it. mr Mystery is not the problem here. If you really want to improve, try and take it for what it is, to help you become a better producer that goes beyond the (already too long) two minute intros. |
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| Innocence Lost |
1. I'm not offended
2. I never said uglyboy was the problem
3. You plan on changing their diapers too? ffs. |
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| Innocence Lost |
No more intro's, fine with me.
Carry on, |
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| deegee |
| quote: | Originally posted by Innocence Lost
Because there isn't a main climax? lmao! |
Because there isn't a single melodic element! Kick hat bass hat kick hat bass hat is not a trance track, and there's nothing to critique.
Write. A. Melody. Even a crappy one. Write a chord progression. Even a crappy one. Those things will let people be able to say "Well, okay, if you tried doing this and this instead it might sound better." |
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| Innocence Lost |
| quote: | Originally posted by deegee
Because there isn't a single melodic element! Kick hat bass hat kick hat bass hat is not a trance track, and there's nothing to critique.
Write. A. Melody. Even a crappy one. Write a chord progression. Even a crappy one. Those things will let people be able to say "Well, okay, if you tried doing this and this instead it might sound better." |
ffs, i got your point now stfu. |
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| Storyteller |
| quote: | Originally posted by Innocence Lost
No more intro's, fine with me.
Carry on, |
Good now I can finish watching Breaking Bad a second time and work my way to Better Call Saul. |
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| Storyteller |
| Funnily enough the same discussion took place several months ago. |
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| Innocence Lost |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
Funnily enough the same discussion took place several months ago. |
Yeah I sucked, everything was outa key etc :toothless |
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| deegee |
| quote: | Originally posted by Innocence Lost
ffs, i got your point now stfu. |
I'm going to quote this in a few days when you post another intro. |
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| TranceElevation |
| You're not obliged to comment. You could easily ignore his wips/intros/whatever and carry on. |
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| deegee |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceElevation
You're not obliged to comment. |
Nor are you. |
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