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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 576)
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| Storyteller |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
Morrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrre |
Okay, there is slightly more now ;)
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| SystematicX1 |
Honestly, I’m on the road and listening in my Jeep and probably not in a position
to critique however….
Story, dood…..really really enjoying this. On repeat
When that piano hits. Bruh….
So want to say more on this but can’t.
Keep working this cut man |
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| TranceLover007 |
Just one think I would change - kick, for some reason is not sitting well for me in this WIP. The rest is really smooth!
Cheers,
Darek
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
Okay, there is slightly more now ;)
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| cryophonik |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
Okay, there is slightly more now ;)
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Very chill groove. Love it and looking forward to the final version! :toocool: |
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| SystematicX1 |
Cryo gracing us with his presence?
Yea...Story, that track has got to get finished man.
Been plugging away at some new LD&B
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| Storyteller |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
Been plugging away at some new LD&B
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Kick is a bit dull, too boomy for my liking. Overall mixwise it feels like there is a blanket across the whole thing (with exception of the vocals). Loudening the high-end percs would help as well as accentuating some of the mid/high of the syths. Low end is overly present. That reese bass needs to tone it down a lot :D
The vocals sit well in the mix.
The beat with new elements added at 2:18 is great, the previous remarks still apply.
Don't get me wrong as I've focussed a lot on the mix in all my remarks. Musically it's interesting and a pleasure to listen to. |
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
Kick is a bit dull, too boomy for my liking. Overall mixwise it feels like there is a blanket across the whole thing (with exception of the vocals). Loudening the high-end percs would help as well as accentuating some of the mid/high of the syths. Low end is overly present. That reese bass needs to tone it down a lot :D
The vocals sit well in the mix.
The beat with new elements added at 2:18 is great, the previous remarks still apply.
Don't get me wrong as I've focussed a lot on the mix in all my remarks. Musically it's interesting and a pleasure to listen to. |
Everything you said is dead on Story and personally, I was afraid of that as it was my dumb ass that shouldn't have even attempted mixing anything knowing my situation. The situation? A BIG empty room with wood floors....NOT a good combo. |
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| SystematicX1 |
So, this is a remix. Still trying to line up the Vox and damn that is hard. Never heard of this guy but he goes by the name AYOKAY and this is a track called 1000 Nights.
note* Trying to challenge myself by not listening to the original,and still haven't so..I have no idea if I am totally destroying his cut or if it adds some character...love to hear your thoughts
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| theterran |
Oof, still super dead here. Full month no reply? That's lame :(
Probably far too late on this one...but if you @SystematicX1 still want some feedback...I've got it all typed out :D. |
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by theterran
Oof, still super dead here. Full month no reply? That's lame :(
Probably far too late on this one...but if you @SystematicX1 still want some feedback...I've got it all typed out :D. |
LOVE to hear it =OP |
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
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Gordan!! What is up man man, long time no hear/see. Glad ya made it back to us =O)
What have you been doing musically...is this track you are presenting one you are currently working on or, is this something you had working previously. Did you take a break or have you continually been working on tracks since you last posted
Your piece Šutnja (Original VOCAL mix) - Vocal is correct for this. And yea, duh...if you label it Vox, you better have it. In my opinion however, it may be a touch too much. I honestly dug the vocoder but it became redundant,quick. I mean, the track is actually kind of a long piece. And for me to say it's to long well...that would be the kettle getting called black. My point is, there is nothing but "build" for nearly 2 minutes of the track until some kind of percussion comes in. If you put vocals entirely with the music, there is nowhere to go for the listener. If a track is going to take you on a journey, it needs to have breaks and a plateau. Hopefully that makes sense
Totally dig the "hook" lead. Curious if you worked some delay in there is you wouldn't fill out the phrase a little more.
As well, using some notch filters on both of the tones that make up that lead to fade in between (automate a lowpass/highpass on the frequency )each other lends variation to that lead and keeps it exciting throughout.
Overall I like this vibe and mostly glad you are producing and are well =O) Good stuff man and good hearing from ya! |
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