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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Something i've been working on yesterday.
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not bad interesting style, little weird in places! i would cut some sub out of it, you dont need that much |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Andy28
Good stuff, wish trance was more like this again.
Your getting as bad as me lol, you need to finish some of your tracks and get them out there!!!
Alright guys...
Here's a remix I've been working on for Cryo.. Go easy on me its my first ever vocal track and its just basically my take on Daves original so chords and melody are all his doing I've just basically reworked it but in a more trance kind of way..
Its not completely finished so as per per feedback and any suggestions are more then welcome.
Cheers |
the vocal for me is a bit too dry for that style of track, id add a plate style reverb if you have one but dont overdo it, maybe some bits of delay here and there, little bit of chorus
i think the kick and bass need to come up together a bit more, its not far off but when i turn it up its not really thumping yet |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
more techno style this one :cool:
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Great like usual. Don't really have any advice to give. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by djnitride
Here is a track I have been working on some this weekend... Does it work from a conceptual level? I realize the percussion and mixing need work. I havn't gone into mixing deep yet and am just getting close to finishing the arrangement:
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I think I am going to redo the synth progression in the first half after listening to it again. |
Overall this sounds good to me, although it doesn't sound particularly current. I get a 90's vibe from this track. I think the mixing sounds good and it is interesting albeit mellow and progressive. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Andy28
Good stuff, wish trance was more like this again.
Your getting as bad as me lol, you need to finish some of your tracks and get them out there!!!
Alright guys...
Here's a remix I've been working on for Cryo.. Go easy on me its my first ever vocal track and its just basically my take on Daves original so chords and melody are all his doing I've just basically reworked it but in a more trance kind of way..
Its not completely finished so as per per feedback and any suggestions are more then welcome.
Cheers |
Sounds awesome! It is a bit dated in style in my opinion, but it is pretty and melodic and those songs sound good year in and year out in my opinion. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
Here is a remix I did with my pal DJ Veaux for Cryophonik & Avonlea Montague. This is mainly for promotional purposes as the song is finished, however this section gets more views these days :P
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Trancelover03591
Here is a remix I did with my pal DJ Veaux for Cryophonik & Avonlea Montague. This is mainly for promotional purposes as the song is finished, however this section gets more views these days :P
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i like the start man but after that it just gets too complicated with too many different styles IMO
i would drop the funk bass sound and that stab and try and come up with something that grooves a bit better, the section from 2:34 to the break is nice, i would also use that! |
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| evo8 |
last one from me this week and yes i really need to start finishing these.....
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Andy28
Alright guys...
Here's a remix I've been working on for Cryo.. Go easy on me its my first ever vocal track and its just basically my take on Daves original so chords and melody are all his doing I've just basically reworked it but in a more trance kind of way..
Its not completely finished so as per per feedback and any suggestions are more then welcome.
Cheers |
Andy, most of your effort should be directed on Amy vocal as this could make a massive difference on final product - there is at lease few good ways of getting this vocal a nice lift (as Richard mention already) but also you could use another cool method of creating massive revers reverb to support Amy main vocal (PM me if you would like to know how this is created as I don't wont to wright long comment lol) - I use this method in my "Ultraviolet" remix :D
Cheers,
Darek |
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| madmuso |
| quote: | Originally posted by Andy28
Alright guys...
Here's a remix I've been working on for Cryo.. Go easy on me its my first ever vocal track and its just basically my take on Daves original so chords and melody are all his doing I've just basically reworked it but in a more trance kind of way..
Its not completely finished so as per per feedback and any suggestions are more then welcome.
Cheers |
Sounds great. The only thing I noticed right away was the vocal eq, sounds as though the vocal was eq'd whilst solo'd not while the whole track is playing, so to me it sounds out of balance. I would add in some more top end "air" ( 10 khz shelf) and reduce the mids.
nice work! |
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| Andy28 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
i think the kick and bass need to come up together a bit more, its not far off but when i turn it up its not really thumping yet |
I feel I always over do it a tad so I purposely toned it down a bit.. You talking in terms of volume or do u think a tad eq boost would do it??
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
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Yeah I get what you mean about the reverse verb trick but will pm you later anyway about something else.. Cheers
Thanks to everyone else for their positive comments, but alot of credit has to go to Dave, I've just put my twist on his track. I'll get round to giving feedback to others when I get a chance..
So overall it seems my issues are with the vocals, some great advice from all you guys so big thanks and hopefully I can put them to good use.
Cheers |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
last one from me this week and yes i really need to start finishing these.....
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Can really imagine this with big floatey leads following the existing main synth, great for the floor |
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