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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 148)
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| Deillon |
| Paulino, I have to agree with optik, your sound design is great, so is your mixing. But there are some melodic parts clashing with each other. |
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| Deillon |
| The bassline still sounds off. |
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| PaULiN0 |
Which one?
Have another listen please. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by PaULiN0
How about now?
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I think the mixing and sound design are pretty good. I listen to a lot of WIPs and yours is on the more pleasant and balanced end. However it is a safe song and it isn't incredibly original. I don't know how much of it is loops or whatever, but all I can say is not bad, but there is a lot of room for creating a more sophisticated song structurally and musically. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
Here is a link to my entry to the Gareth Emery "Eye of the Storm" remix competition (I don't think I can embed it). I posted it less than 24 hours ago and yet have made it to the most listened page (when you can see 50) so I hope to stay on that page the rest of the competition and move up. I ultimately stayed close to my original structure when I posted it as a WIP, because I structured it to flow with the vocals and my first instincts on how it should sound. I went for a soft dynamic mix. Overall I am happy with the end result because I feel it is an improvement on previous songs I have made, and that is what is most important to me at this point (though winning would be cool too!).
http://play.beatport.com/contests/g...53a0d1a71a060e3 |
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| PaULiN0 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Trancelover03591
I think the mixing and sound design are pretty good. I listen to a lot of WIPs and yours is on the more pleasant and balanced end. However it is a safe song and it isn't incredibly original. I don't know how much of it is loops or whatever, but all I can say is not bad, but there is a lot of room for creating a more sophisticated song structurally and musically. |
Thank you trancelover, there no loops on this project fyi. I'm still in the process changing the structure however i will always upload different sides of the project so stay tuned. |
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| scorpradio |
| quote: | Originally posted by Trancelover03591
Here is a link to my entry to the Gareth Emery "Eye of the Storm" remix competition (I don't think I can embed it). I posted it less than 24 hours ago and yet have made it to the most listened page (when you can see 50) so I hope to stay on that page the rest of the competition and move up. I ultimately stayed close to my original structure when I posted it as a WIP, because I structured it to flow with the vocals and my first instincts on how it should sound. I went for a soft dynamic mix. Overall I am happy with the end result because I feel it is an improvement on previous songs I have made, and that is what is most important to me at this point (though winning would be cool too!).
http://play.beatport.com/contests/g...53a0d1a71a060e3 |
Good job man...voted for you! |
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| PaULiN0 |
| Yeah that is dope imo. You def got my vote. |
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| PaULiN0 |
Here's my fav WIP so far. I easily reverse engineered two basslines for this one from a classic thrillseekers tune from back in the day.
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
Good job man...voted for you! |
| quote: | Originally posted by PaULiN0
Yeah that is dope imo. You def got my vote. |
Thanks guys! |
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| PaULiN0 |
Added new pad and bass line damn it was hard for to find a good pad that fits.
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