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| DJ RANN |
| quote: | Originally posted by SynthNinja
Here's my contribute, 3 Mids. baselines to get some groove on, it goes system1, idxi then back to system 1 then to Zebra which ima change since me hears a lot of distortion. I still need to put the Vox in so bare with me, next clip will be the crescendo.
Oh and the bass drum might sound unnatural which is because I made it sonic academy kick 2 to get the 90's bounce to it. |
This is actually a really nicely produced start of a track. I love this type of . I'd pull back on the kick though too; don't pay attention to numbers, they're meaningless. Just do it by ear so it doesn't cloud the mid freq you have going on there. |
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| DJ RANN |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
It's an idea
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Really great idea here. I'm not a fan of that hat that comes in at 2:40, replace that outright. The second thing is that click that's coming off that gated synth line that comes in at 1:46. It sounds like a fault not a design element.
Not sure if anyone know what I'm talking about but Vstation just do make that clicking noise when the envelope wasn't right.
Otherwise, really nice track you have bubbling there. |
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| SynthNinja |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ RANN
This is actually a really nicely produced start of a track. I love this type of . I'd pull back on the kick though too; don't pay attention to numbers, they're meaningless. Just do it by ear so it doesn't cloud the mid freq you have going on there. |
Awwl Thank You Rann, it really means a lot to me, cheers my man. |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
It's an idea
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i like the sound but kick doesnt really fit for me, the bass/pad/synths are very loud and wide
i thought if you brought the kick level up that might help but maybe the whole drums might need to be mixed better
really like the idea though |
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| SystematicX1 |
This is an odd one for me but I keep working on it.
*2:26 and beyond is just experimental composition,not sure if it is going anywhere which is stumping me the most.
Could use some advice on this as I am not sure to scrap it or keep working it (and advice with)
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| SynthNinja |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
This is an odd one for me but I keep working on it.
*2:26 and beyond is just experimental composition,not sure if it is going anywhere which is stumping me the most.
Could use some advice on this as I am not sure to scrap it or keep working it (and advice with)
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I'm liking this, the idea is really good but needs more work, it does sound close to an original concept thats been done before which is some what pleasing nonetheless. |
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by SynthNinja
I'm liking this, the idea is really good but needs more work, it does sound close to an original concept thats been done before which is some what pleasing nonetheless. |
Thanks! Cleaned er up a bit
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| SynthNinja |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
Thanks! Cleaned er up a bit
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Now you got yourself an original, way to go. I couldn't find anything I didn't like this time. Everything flowed smoothly. |
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by SynthNinja
Now you got yourself an original, way to go. I couldn't find anything I didn't like this time. Everything flowed smoothly. |
Thank You! Appreciate that. Oddly I found myself attached to that piece and it worked out |
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| SynthNinja |
Alright my Turney,
Masters of melodies, I need your help.
Does this have composition? or is it an A - Minor newb attempt of a track :(
Paaaalmmmm... Haaaallppp |
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by SynthNinja
Alright my Turney,
Masters of melodies, I need your help.
Does this have composition? or is it an A - Minor newb attempt of a track :(
Paaaalmmmm... Haaaallppp |
I dig this. I reaally do.
@2:23 This transition made me feel as if you started deviating a bit in a off tone bass layer. It actually isn't a bad transition tbh but it made me feel as though I was listening to a DJ set rather than a produced composition.
Beautiful transit period 2:50-4:00
04:12 - There it is again...there is something underlying and I cannot tell if it is your sub and mid range going off on a different note or tonality.
If I had any other critique it would have to be in the kick area. Never been a fan of that flat tone kick but I understand and know a lot who do. Total creative choice
Nice track man |
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| SynthNinja |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
I dig this. I reaally do.
@2:23 This transition made me feel as if you started deviating a bit in a off tone bass layer. It actually isn't a bad transition tbh but it made me feel as though I was listening to a DJ set rather than a produced composition.
Beautiful transit period 2:50-4:00
04:12 - There it is again...there is something underlying and I cannot tell if it is your sub and mid range going off on a different note or tonality.
If I had any other critique it would have to be in the kick area. Never been a fan of that flat tone kick but I understand and know a lot who do. Total creative choice
Nice track man |
Thanks System, will look into this and see what I can do. |
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