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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by optik
start sounds great- I like the bell eq high up.
when the bass comes it's weak - mainly because your kick is doing the job of bassline already. the bass synth needs to be more mid-bass and have a load more presence
2:17 break is great - but a little too long cut in half before the new saw comes in
picth wheel could go higher
doesn't deliver when it drops back in.. shame.
has potential 3:06 onwards needs to go and be re made to deliver on the promise - it has more energy in the first 16 bars than the whole of this section
hope this helps
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Toby where have you been man??? - nice to see you still contributing over here :D
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by kadomony
hotness. love the bass especially. i'm listening on earbuds and the harmonics give a great sense for the low end.
here's one i just started putting together ideas for. been a while since i made something and changed tastes somewhat significantly over the past couple years:
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Can't comment of bass line as my armature in ear headphones really wouldn't do the justice but this jazzy flavor is clicking with me - imo you are going right direction my friend ;)
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| TranceLover007 |
This is the style which always was and will resonate with me - give it a run and let me know what you guys think about it (like a style, energy, vibe, groove and melodic development?)
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
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quite like this, id like the drums to have a bit more reverb (short room/ambience) on them just to make them sound a bit bigger but that mightnt work with the lead you have there
not sure on that big vocally thing but thats just personal preference, track grooves along nicely |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by kadomony
hotness. love the bass especially. i'm listening on earbuds and the harmonics give a great sense for the low end.
here's one i just started putting together ideas for. been a while since i made something and changed tastes somewhat significantly over the past couple years:
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lovely sounds as usual! - one thing tho, that clap/snare isnt just sitting nicely for some reason, i think the sample itself is ok but maybe just a little too upfront? |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
This is the style which always was and will resonate with me - give it a run and let me know what you guys think about it (like a style, energy, vibe, groove and melodic development?)
Thanks |
very nice Darek, loving the bassline progression, nice and uplifting :D |
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| scorpradio |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
This is the style which always was and will resonate with me - give it a run and let me know what you guys think about it (like a style, energy, vibe, groove and melodic development?)
Thanks |
Nice man...sounds nice and phat! |
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| Andy28 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
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Really liking this, took me by surprise a bit it wasn't what I was expecting at all, would love to hear more. Quite dark and deep to begin with but very groovy, vox fx work well also.
Here's a rework of a previous trance wip...
I can never get my mixes sounding the way as I would like, they all seem to sound the same and I can never put my finger on it on where I'm going wrong, but I'm obviously making the same mistakes each time when it comes to mixing :conf: |
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| PaULiN0 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Andy28
I can never get my mixes sounding the way as I would like, they all seem to sound the same and I can never put my finger on it on where I'm going wrong, but I'm obviously making the same mistakes each time when it comes to mixing :conf: |
Sounds radical to me Andy, not really sure whats wrong with it. |
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| Andy28 |
| Idk, I just don't think it sounds as good as pro tracks, its missing something?? |
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| PaULiN0 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Andy28
Idk, I just don't think it sounds as good as pro tracks, its missing something?? |
Well it has the same uplifting kick the pro's do and the saw arp as well. Maybe add a percussion loop or your own? It feels like thats prob missing compared to other uplifters/ |
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| Andy28 |
| quote: | Originally posted by PaULiN0
Well it has the same uplifting kick the pro's do |
I stole it from that free template that was on here the other day :stongue: (Cheers ardea btw although you didn't need a top layer it has enough punch already)
I honestly can't put my finger on it. When I A/B to other tracks mine sound more trebley where others sound more focused on mid/high-mids if that makes sense? |
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