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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Hey, nice to see you back. Sounds very nice and rich. Melody, bass, kick, hihats, sweeps all very pleasant to listen. At 2:34 you start to heat up but then suddenly (for me) it goes to break, also not sure if that pitch changing transition at 2:50 fits. Nice stuff, Rich. |
the production is really nice and i loved that intro, really got my anticipation going, bringing the kick in like that is classic Prydz
then i thought the track progression was a bit over complicated and could really get into it, i do think there's a banger in there somewhere but just my opinion! |
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| evo8 |
@gordan...here is the remix i was working on, just posting here anyway even though I kinda left it for a while and went back to it, at least it got me back making tracks again
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
So I still cant embed SC now and cannot seem to get them to talk to me about it.
All I can do for now is post a link to this new track. I'm finishing things now ready for a new name, image and everything.
Kinda after a summer chilled vibe here, nice to be back btw!
https://soundcloud.com/butlerrichard/boys-on |
I really like the chord progression and melodies. I think the hi/mid high elements of the drum loop, like the hihats, shakers and other mid-high percussion instruments are a bit too loud. Also, I think the level of the main lead melody level is too low. Overall, this is such a beachy, jumpy prog track. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Great and lush sound here Caleb, nice track man |
Thank you Rich! |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
Welp Caleb...really dig this. Has a very Prydz like feel.
And me personally,I actually dig the transition,which btw that Arp is probably my favorite part.
I would say that I found the vox to be more apparent in repetition. To me in seemed like it could be left more underneath the mix as a blend or added atmosphere.
I am wondering how it would develop if more tones used some filter automation. Hearing a lot of dope tones and would love to hear the cutoff. Might even add to blending and atmosphere.
Overall this is a great sounding track man. Very well done on the production. |
Thank you for the in depth feedback System! |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
I like it overall. Main chords are nice and sounds good. Would cut out 1:37 - 2:22 (it does not bring anything to the song imo) and go for different transition, with just main chords. Would cut out 3:53-4:23 too, does not need to go that wild imo :). Good work |
Thank you Gordan! |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
@gordan...here is the remix i was working on, just posting here anyway even though I kinda left it for a while and went back to it, at least it got me back making tracks again
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Its a nice addon on atmosphere, i much like that proggy arpy bass. When kick hits you cut the arpy thing in two segments (if i'm right) and it sinks a bit into bass not producing enough groove anymore, something is missing for me, not much though, some slight adjustment would probably work. |
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| Woony |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
@gordan...here is the remix i was working on, just posting here anyway even though I kinda left it for a while and went back to it, at least it got me back making tracks again |
I like it, the bass is a bit floppy though.
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
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That saw-y arp gets a bit lost in the mix.
Did some pretty straightforward trance-y stuff for once.
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| gordan100 |
Did some pretty straightforward trance-y stuff for once.
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Great stuff Woony, love it. |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Did some pretty straightforward trance-y stuff for once.
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Great stuff Woony, love it. [/QUOTE]
its a bit quiet, not such a bad thing, not sure if you normalised it or not?
love the groove, i would be tempted to open the filter on the bass synth, just to bring it forward a little more
would also give the low end a little boost around 80-100, just to add a more little thump
love it though, musically really works which is the hard part |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Its a nice addon on atmosphere, i much like that proggy arpy bass. When kick hits you cut the arpy thing in two segments (if i'm right) and it sinks a bit into bass not producing enough groove anymore, something is missing for me, not much though, some slight adjustment would probably work. |
thanks Gordan - i ing lost the bass patch on the dominion so couldn't rectify that problem, you're right - the lfo was too deep on the filter, thanks for listening anyway :) |
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