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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 371)
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
My mixing has been improved by listening to the likes of you and others on here, that is a plain fact.
The vox is too obvious and cheesy right? I felt you might say this so I think I'll change it.
Hope we can release this one mate, lets see how it goes. Are you going to finish the original? |
yeah i need to finish that one |
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
last one for this weekend, downtempo
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For me, there are songs that come around and it grabs you and puts you off on a journey. This has so much of that feel, then @ the 2 minute marker it dissolves into this very pillow like atmosphere. Then it ends..lol very dreamy.
You have a very good nack at capturing mood Evo
I am assuming that this is a true WIP because most of the material I hear you post is very polished so I wont even comment on the mix.
Hope this makes a final cut
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Decided to break this out again and try to rework the mix.
Still need some slight tweaks in the composition but overall I think it's starting to develop more.
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
For me, there are songs that come around and it grabs you and puts you off on a journey. This has so much of that feel, then @ the 2 minute marker it dissolves into this very pillow like atmosphere. Then it ends..lol very dreamy.
You have a very good nack at capturing mood Evo
I am assuming that this is a true WIP because most of the material I hear you post is very polished so I wont even comment on the mix.
Hope this makes a final cut
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Decided to break this out again and try to rework the mix.
Still need some slight tweaks in the composition but overall I think it's starting to develop more.
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i like it! |
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| evo8 |
back to trance attempts
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| soulstar606 |
| that feels too linear, not enough swing in it. the kick sounds robotic, the rest has a good feel though |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
back to trance attempts
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Lovely arp mate and yes I enjoy this but do wonder if a better kick could be found for this as the one you have is a little 'hit a plastic bucket'... |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
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Decided to break this out again and try to rework the mix.
Still need some slight tweaks in the composition but overall I think it's starting to develop more.
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Good job mate, nice n fresh. If you REALLY want to add some icing I'd say bring in more exciting little riffs and arpys here n there to lift the excitement, and for example the first little roll about a minute in is nice but could be a bit better - maybe get some inspiration from a few up to date DnB tracks to motivate you in the final furlong |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Lovely arp mate and yes I enjoy this but do wonder if a better kick could be found for this as the one you have is a little 'hit a plastic bucket'... |
hmm i kinda like that kick because of the distortion but might try some other ones as i can see what you mean, thanks rich |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
last one for this weekend, downtempo
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Nice atmosphere here! |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Remix of Evo 8 track - untitled
This what I got so far
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That's nice Richard... Clear, strong mix... |
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| gordan100 |
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Like it. Not a fan of genre, but this sound very solid. Hope you're not going to extend it too much, i think 3 min is enough. |
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