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| Richard Butler |
Is this drop ok without hatz or should I add some?
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Is this drop ok without hatz or should I add some?
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Sounds fine without hats to me. I like chopped voices you have, bass, it has a groove. First 4 bars of melody (0:46 - 0:52) are nice to me then it goes in different direction than i would like. Snare transition from 1:22 - 1:38 is not my favorite too, but that's more a general dislike about that kind of transitions than a critique of your track. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Is this drop ok without hatz or should I add some?
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Hi Richard,
First of all, really nice melodic concept man (it is along my line of liking lol) - nicely crafted sound with cool and catchy melodic development. As far as first break, hmm you may have to work it out a bit different way (for me at lease) to sustain this awesome vibe - also in second part of your WIP I can only hear kick but no drums elements anymore so I would work some more to expose them a bit more as they will drive your vibe and add nice driving groove - my $0.02
Cheer mate,
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
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Lets start with this - drums are well defined and in my view don't need too much of work (maybe just only blending or gluing it with the rest could add some more benefits) - the rest is really hard to judge as your sound choices are not the best at the moment + your overall soundscape is really flat and this doesn't help with my listener experience ;)
Cheers,
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
Here is a bit of change direction for me lol - a little chillout work to get my mind of EDM/Dance genre - what do you guys think?
Any comment is appreciated :)
Thank you,
Darek |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Here is a bit of change direction for me lol - a little chillout work to get my mind of EDM/Dance genre - what do you guys think?
Any comment is appreciated :)
Thank you,
Darek |
Sounds nice and pleasant for listening. Nice melodies and atmosphere.
This is good Darek, i would like to hear more. You should get your mind of edm more often :) |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Sounds nice and pleasant for listening. Nice melodies and atmosphere.
This is good Darek, i would like to hear more. You should get your mind of edm more often :) |
Very nice indeed no crits man. Well good bass.
Thanks for feedbacks on Athletico guys, will work on it and have just uploaded newer version with better drop synth s9 some dry layer), arp in intro etc |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
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Nice work and decent drums
Maybe put some automated nice shiny delays coming in and out on the arp to sound like little birdies chirping |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Here is a bit of change direction for me lol - a little chillout work to get my mind of EDM/Dance genre - what do you guys think?
Any comment is appreciated :)
Thank you,
Darek |
Darek i think you could do better with the bassline, not sure how but i dont think its fitting the groove well enough? |
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| evo8 |
Playing around with this tonight
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
Playing around with this tonight
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I think that you could do something with this one - already has some coll potential although still not settled on this bass line but it could be just me lol ;)
Thank for your cement man, appreciate.
Darek |
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