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| Richard Butler |
| Exactly what I thought after posting it up Evolve. It was done very quickly. Just a bit of free cheese! |
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| Evolve140 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Exactly what I thought after posting it up Evolve. It was done very quickly. Just a bit of free cheese! |
anythoughts on finishing this one?was thinking about putting in a lead.
https://soundcloud.com/evolve140/ri...ere-you-left-me |
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| Richard Butler |
Another ++ sound from you, deffo finnish. Very imaginative.
Wut u think of this one
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| soulstar606 |
| the intro is really cool, i really like that.....but then once the beat kicks in it just fizzles into mediocre boring.....after that unique intro you need to contrast it with something bold and defined... |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by soulstar606
the intro is really cool, i really like that.....but then once the beat kicks in it just fizzles into mediocre boring.....after that unique intro you need to contrast it with something bold and defined... |
You gave me the kick up the arse I needed, and helped me come up with something much more original I think
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| TranceElevation |
| But why do u compress so much |
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| evo8 |
liked the pluck tones at the start, felt like the track was really heading somewhere, then you dropped that sound and brought in a bass which doesnt really groove enough for me, bit stop start... |
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| evo8 |
was going to post this on hearthisat but doesnt seem to be embed option yet ( or i cant see it)
some laid back stuff (was doing a lot of heavy techno recently)
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| soulstar606 |
[QUOTE]Originally posted by Richard Butler
You gave me the kick up the arse I needed, and helped me come up with something much more original I think
ok very good, but, why the ear shattering chalk eraser clap? but yes youre on the right track with making something clean and defined......and when the hats kick in at the end...thats actually when it sounds pretty good......you could drop all the rest and just go with that last part......
but the point is.....with the intro you had coupled with something more defined like this...it creates the contrast that is needed in successful music......i'm not talking about EDM...i'm talking about good music.....good music has contrast.......it's bold.....it has groove and emotion and personality....
dont be controlled by the piano roll.....make a beat without using the mouse once.....load up a drum rack with drum pieces in it and hammer out a real beat...
sequence the synth part in real time.....be the musician......stop being the "producer", roll your sleeves up, and be the musician....then be the producer to pull everything together
youve got to infuse the song with your energy.......push it, pull it, grab hold of it and swing it around, it's impossible to do this when you are using the mouse only, use two hands at once, do some crossfading.....make the music real |
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| Evolve140 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
You gave me the kick up the arse I needed, and helped me come up with something much more original I think
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bass is a bit massivey-preset sounding, has pretty good space but needs some groove |
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| Evolve140 |
| quote: | Originally posted by soulstar606
the intro is really cool, i really like that.....but then once the beat kicks in it just fizzles into mediocre boring.....after that unique intro you need to contrast it with something bold and defined... |
thanks for checking guys, yeah I was just experimenting a bit with that bassline, wanted a futurehouse-ish sound as I'm playing around with massive a bit more, but you're right I think making something that is on par with the atmospheric pretty intro would be a good move
if anyone has anything that they want me personally to listen to just link here, I'll be around this weekend |
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| LoveHate |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
thanks for checking guys, yeah I was just experimenting a bit with that bassline, wanted a futurehouse-ish sound as I'm playing around with massive a bit more, but you're right I think making something that is on par with the atmospheric pretty intro would be a good move
if anyone has anything that they want me personally to listen to just link here, I'll be around this weekend |
i dont know what to say other than, i am really feeling tha track, and would add it to my set when its done.
here is my latest
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