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| TranceElevation |
| soulstar, a smart guy. |
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| gordan100 |
I think that soulstar can have his opinion, and i respect his opinion. However, my opinion is that labels, actually a label you like personaly, not just any label, can provide you their fanbase which is your target audience, and you just can't reach that fanbase by yourself.
Oh, and i think this all goes really offtopic now. I'm sorry if i was a cause of that. Let's help Richard to make a top trance tune... |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Let's help Richard to make a top trance tune... |
I don't know how to make this track better. There's something missing synth wise, but I'm afraid to layer as I might make a more congested sound.
Do you think I should layer the plucks more? Or just re-do them better? |
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| soulstar606 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Constantin
Here's a prog track, help me mix it please guys
That kick ain't working to well, try sth with more energy in the low freq area xD |
if i were to remix your song.......this is what id do.....the intro only needs to be 8 bars long...that nextt part is good i like it, good buildup......until 1:38, this is where you drop your catchy bassline and beat...no hats nothing, except the bass and the kick....then maybe one more short buildup, the song would be 3 minutes long |
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| Richard Butler |
| Nice track for driving to Evolve and well mixed and good sounds |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
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not dying about the sample but its nice, would be a nice early track to build into something else |
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| Richard Butler |
Worth working on? (after a few tracks)
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| matuto |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Worth working on? (after a few tracks)
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Hey Richard,
I really dig the melody, definitely worth working on!
What do ya guys think about this song:
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Worth working on? (after a few tracks)
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Nice sounds, melody and progression |
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| gordan100 |
What do ya guys think about this song:
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Sounds good Matuto, but i think it needs more layers. There is too little things going on in 3 minutes of song. |
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| gordan100 |
How about this?
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