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| Evolve140 |
thanks for checking scorp. i will check out the groove and see if i can pimp it out a bit more. believe it or not there is a lot of different swing and timing component to all of the elements especially the drums. i don't use loops or anything like that in any of my tracks. everything is all by hand, but listening now i can imagine expanding on the percussion.
btw this is the first thing i've worked on in 3 months so yeah. not too shabby i hope haha |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
first track since my break in november. enjoy :)
feedback welcome as usual and questions welcome
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This has a nice originality to it, and I like the way you dare to be so Spartan. Nice soothing mix. |
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| Richard Butler |
My annoying WIP has changed again, now into something like trance, weird.
I might add a vocal?
Domesty's track inspired this by the way. Not sure if I have the bass right, esp' the timing.
Not mixed yet. Claps need centring etc, and more sub.
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| Evolve140 |
thanks! haha what do you mean by spartan?
any thoughts on its completeness or what it may be lacking musically/dance track wise?
going to outro it, then it's done? the age old question |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
thanks! haha what do you mean by spartan?
any thoughts on its completeness or what it may be lacking musically/dance track wise?
going to outro it, then it's done? the age old question |
I'd say it could use a memorable stand out item of some sort, maybe a little home made vocal tribe thing or whatever.
Spartan - I mean nice and clean with few sounds at one time playing, often very effective. |
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| madmuso |
| quote: | Originally posted by Seandroid
Yup! That's me singing. I still have some work to do, I'm actually thinking of re-recording some of the chorus vocals as well. I'll check out your tune when I get home!
I'd just call it electro house but you could also probably call it big room. |
cool, nice singing mate. Hey What mic and pre did you use?
p.s. I still wanna here the hook section peak some more! Pulled out of the driveway yesterday and that hook just popped into my head, thats a good thing! |
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| scorpradio |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Here is the original steam (from vocalist) which I was ask to create remix from - you can see that if you have great stem your job is much more easy lol and you can be really creative. This original track was a trance one in 140 bpm lol.
Cheers,
Darek |
Yea man...much easier to deal with. And I know JUST what you mean about the 140 bpm. Those are tough as hell |
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| deegee |
| quote: | Originally posted by Robotrance
i want to participate to thread.
i was in greece last summer and tried making a melody i heard ever since.
this is as close as i come lol.
http://picosong.com/Lpyi/ |
Heh. I grew up in a Greek neighbourhood--this sounds like electronic bouzouki. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
Yea man...much easier to deal with. And I know JUST what you mean about the 140 bpm. Those are tough as hell |
Yeah, sorry this track is already my remix version of 140bpm original one but the vocal is as it was in this trance version lol -> this vocal was really, really good and clean so my work was obviously limited as far as reworking and repairing - Amy is really great to work with and Dave can really conform that lol
This remix was about exposing the smoothness and lightness of Amy vocal and with some addition of leads (which I was trying to create some form of conversation between them like in 2:05 and more with piano parts) I was able to create this melancholic but vibe driven atmosphere.
Cheers,
Darek |
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| scorpradio |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Yeah, sorry this track is already my remix version of 140bpm original one but the vocal is as it was in this trance version lol -> this vocal was really, really good and clean so my work was obviously limited as far as reworking and repairing - Amy is really great to work with and Dave can really conform that lol
This remix was about exposing the smoothness and lightness of Amy vocal and with some addition of leads (which I was trying to create some form of conversation between them like in 2:05 and more with piano parts) I was able to create this melancholic but vibe driven atmosphere.
Cheers,
Darek |
Darek, your productions are always tight as hell man.
Thing that stands out is the piano movement...very bright.
That kick!
And you nailed the melancholy vibe...
(more bass /chuckles) |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
Darek, your productions are always tight as hell man.
Thing that stands out is the piano movement...very bright.
That kick!
And you nailed the melancholy vibe...
(more bass /chuckles) |
So which part did you like and which you would like to improve (if this is all up to you lol).
Darek |
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| scorpradio |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
So which part did you like and which you would like to improve (if this is all up to you lol).
Darek |
To me the most significant part would have to be at 1:50 with the stab.
It fills the track out a lot. I also dig the underlying arp which adds alot of dimension to the track.
Again, LOVE that kick (slight verb?)
If it was me?..oh you don't want that..lol well, again, you have the dreamy dreary vibe already but I have always liked a sidechained pulsing bass undertone on ambient tracks.As well a deep sustained huge sub. I also dig the barely able to pick up reese floating behind the sub ala 7lions-Tritonal duck |
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