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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 154)
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| PaULiN0 |
it, i'll post another one.
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| PaULiN0 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Trancelover03591
Put some sort of a lead over it. |
Here's your lead.
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| Evolve140 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
yeah and when you get it you already have the skills imo to go further, enjoy the journey :) |
managed to snag some inspiration. ahh, girls.
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| PaULiN0 |
I finally got percussion right for this break track and solid basslines that i actually didn't come up by my self. I hope later i can get better and make me own, boy they look different from trance basslines patterns. opinions welcome.
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| junkproject |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
yeah sorry for being lazy. naughty boy! i need to delete that ^_^ and at least take the vocals out
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Decent track, it has a nice groove to it. |
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| PaULiN0 |
| quote: | Originally posted by junkproject
Decent track, it has a nice groove to it. |
You skipped me!
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| PaULiN0 |
Try to skip this!
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Vernon Wanderer
Here is the only worthy WIP in the past 6 months, somehow the inspiration is just gone.
My main question is if the cello is out of sync? It seems out of sync to me, but i just can't find a way to fit it in properly. Maybe i should throw it out
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I think the cello sounds out of sync because a cello sound often has a slow attack better for playing long notes. I am guessing the synth/sample you are using for the cello has a slow attack and doesn't adapt to shorter notes like what play in your song. If a person (rather than a synth/sample) was playing it live they would adapt their method of playing to create a faster attack on the notes (as in a piece like Bach's Cello suite no. 1 prelude). Also I think the cello should be turned up a bit (if you still use it). I think I get the vibe you are going for with the track. Maybe too many elements playing in the same frequencies is making it a bit muddy? Maybe some panning would help. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by PaULiN0
Pick me Pick me! |
Tell me which one you want me to give feedback on (several posted recently) and I will listen to it and give feedback by tomorrow afternoon. |
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| PaULiN0 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Trancelover03591
Tell me which one you want me to give feedback on (several posted recently) and I will listen to it and give feedback by tomorrow afternoon. |
Your the best, the last one, the remix. I just finished it, cheers. |
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| Storyteller |
| quote: | Originally posted by PaULiN0
Try to skip this!
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Listening while working in the office :).
@evolve140: Nice deephousey sound. Mix seems tight on headphones. You have a lot of variations going on but I'd personally like to hear a bit mnore variation with the bass by (perhaps) leaving it out here and there.
@Paulino: It feels really uncomfortable from the 30second mark and as soon as the bassline comes in at the one minute mark that is confirmed even more. If you'd leave out the pads or change the key that will most likely be solved instantly. This problem keeps rearing its head throughout the entire track unfortunately. Furthermore I miss tension build ups to make the music exciting. After every break the kick just drops in out of the blue.
I've been making some music with a good friend yesterday:
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