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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 11)
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| Juan Paulino |
| quote: | Originally posted by clay
then some of the synths are transposed cause even i can hear its not. |
Alright i'll check it out, thanks for the heads up. I'll change it and update it soon. :) |
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| Vernon Wanderer |
| quote: | Originally posted by legendofdeath
Nice track, I really like it :)
You have to improve you mix quite much, as you said.
I am not into that genre so much but I think you could try to make better transitions when something happen, I mean around 2.33 and 4.48.
Overall it was good with a nice feeling :)
Here is my "Melodic house progressive". No mastering and just slighty mixing. Sorry for the low volume-output :)
https://soundcloud.com/legendofdeat...e-diffrent-kick |
Man that kick is golden. The bass is nice too. :) The chord progression (& melody) is just unispiring, doesn't lead you on a journey(sorry for hippy language). You really need to change the piano sound, it just sounds cheap, same with the plucks. The flute is alright. The breakdown is executed pretty well, but should have some dramatic and/or driving events. Also, get rid of the pitch shifting in the breakdown, at least on such tonal instruments, that sounds just awkward, doesn't provide that rising effect, it just throws everything out of key. You can perform the key shifting via piano roll if you want, but don't use the pitch slider. The mixing is pretty good especially when the drums & bass are active. Just clear out the sub area. The plucks however get kind of lost in the latter part of the breakdown.
Generally it'll turn out good, just fix those issues and you're right on :) |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by clay
only dude here with some sort of skills! pretty awesome stuff. send it to speedyj :P |
yeah not bad, respect for doing it live! |
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| Juan Paulino |
My first Prog House Tune, dk if I should finish.
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| Rodri Santos |
| i like bassline but thats it the rest seems a bit out of place. |
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| Juan Paulino |
| ^ Thanks anyone else? |
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| chris marsh |
Just had a quick listen on my laptop (heard the newest version just linked the old one by accident)
what really popped out for me (on the lappy anyway) is that i feel theres a lack of high freq content
Compare it to a pro track, look at a freq analyzer like voxengos free SPAN and look at the volume of their hats/highs
When at the correct volume you may feel like they need it a bit more attention as they are more prominent (well this is what happened to me anyway)
This is IMO of course and not everyone may agree :)
sounds nice generally though :) |
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| chris marsh |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
its gets too heavy for me raphie around the 4min mark, too much mid rangey stuff, i think its the reverb/delay on the acid line thats killing it - its drowning out the bassline as well
also its a bit treble heavy for my own ears - but i do like the overall groove! |
Again im only on my laptop but what jumps out at me is this:
Nice groove with drums/bass. Nice Clap, very nice
imo synths get repetitive and need some embellishment/musicality
I agree acid line sounds a bit muddy
Detail - fxs/automation/whooshes etc would make it a lot more interesting. Im only just beginning to appreciate how important this is |
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| Juan Paulino |
| Thanks Chris will check that out. |
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| Raphie |
The track still needs some work, but it want it to remain deep, so very floaty subtle changes evolving repetive over time. The midrange will be a challenge as that is a tape echo filling my TT-303, highpassing the tape echo too much will kill the 200<>700hz of the rumble which I consider part of the vibe. I might need to create some space elsewhere. FX wise, yes it can use a bit more ear candy here and there.
Might continue working on it tonight.
For me the "less is more" is very important in this one, very few elements, bit more complex rythms that interact and enrich and not nececarilly make sense by themselves, but when slowly put together it starts building.
| quote: | Originally posted by chris marsh
Again im only on my laptop but what jumps out at me is this:
Nice groove with drums/bass. Nice Clap, very nice
imo synths get repetitive and need some embellishment/musicality
I agree acid line sounds a bit muddy
Detail - fxs/automation/whooshes etc would make it a lot more interesting. Im only just beginning to appreciate how important this is |
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| Dj_Kile |
I posted this one sometime ago in the promotion section
did some remastering, sounds pretty nice
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| Andy28 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Dj_Kile
sounds pretty nice |
But you just cant beat the original :p |
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