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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 521)
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Here is my humble WIP in Funk/Disco style so at this point may work may not be a perfect reflection of this style but at lease I will take on this production challenge :D
Give it a run (I know is short at this point) and let me know if I met this Funk/Disco standards ;)
Cheers,
Darek
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I like this and I get that funk vibe but I believe (and guessing here) that you might get more of a punchier affect with a tempo increase? |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
Darek,
So ,the version I uploaded for some reason had the sub off. I as well didnt have a lot of channels on for some reason.
The new one has those "driven" areas addressed.
As for the guitar area...The first guitar you hear is a sample and the second guitar (the scratch strumming) is me.
What I believe you are hearing is the "tube" effect...I could be wrong. Or,were you referring to the progression of the notes?
Another note...I am most certainly sold on this being a vocal track. I am also composing the track in such a manner, meaning that the vox will start at :08 (yes, on it's own it sounds a little off on the beat count,but there is a reason)
The Arp, for now, is a placeholder as I am still auditioning tones but I am thinking it could be a good replacement for a lead. Thus letting the vox stand out more as it is going to need a pretty powerful voice.
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OK, with your vox on top of the rest, it may actually sound pretty cool but I will have to hear how this will be done and how your vocal would be place in this production -> on more think Phil, can you tell me what kind of sound/instrument is coming in at 0:09 mark?, doeasn't sounds like, hmmm, how to say it, like the one I would use (or like a place holder for something more suitable for this quality product).
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
I like this and I get that funk vibe but I believe (and guessing here) that you might get more of a punchier affect with a tempo increase? |
Yeah, I started with 108 and could go a bit higher if that would make a sense (from vibe/riff perspective) but I will make this decision a bit later when I get this funky electric guitar part to it, on top of that I would like to add some more variation to my bass line patterns as this will help me with my funky/disco vibe :D
Cheers,
Darek |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
This could be close to finish
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Yes sounding nice but I agree with Darek on the drums mate |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Here is my humble WIP in Funk/Disco style so at this point may work may not be a perfect reflection of this style but at lease I will take on this production challenge :D
Give it a run (I know is short at this point) and let me know if I met this Funk/Disco standards ;)
Cheers,
Darek
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Sounding pretty authentic
Here's my fave current funk soul amateur producer, such fun, a chord and sound master imo;
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6UWclvDX3nk
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Owm5EZQFGGc |
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| TranceLover007 |
Lol, he make this whole production process looking so easy lol - I wish I have his skills lol - pretty cool music Richard, thanks for those links.
Darek |
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| DJ RANN |
shhiiiiiiiiiiiitttttttt, that guy has chops. Thanks for upping, never heard of him. |
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| SystematicX1 |
It's close....Had some phasing issues, are they still present?
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
It's close....Had some phasing issues, are they still present?
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Hey Phil,
How is your EQ looks like - on my end this track sounded dry and is asking for some compensation in mid-low/low end.
Cheers,
Darek |
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Hey Phil,
How is your EQ looks like - on my end this track sounded dry and is asking for some compensation in mid-low/low end.
Cheers,
Darek |
Darek, how far did you get into the song..it's there |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
Darek, how far did you get into the song..it's there |
I went thru it three times and I had a bit of fatigue afterwords - it is not a big deal but something to watch for. I still believe that you need to find a way of (probably with drums) moving this vibe or driving it more then you are right now :D
Cheers and remember ignore if you disagree with my suggestion man.
Darek |
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
I went thru it three times and I had a bit of fatigue afterwords - it is not a big deal but something to watch for. I still believe that you need to find a way of (probably with drums) moving this vibe or driving it more then you are right now :D
Cheers and remember ignore if you disagree with my suggestion man.
Darek |
Interesting and no, most of your observations are spot on. Tis the reason I went straight out to the truck and listened. Kinda relieved but at the same point it made me think about what you said about "Fatigued".
Personally, i didnt get that but to another's ears...hmm |
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