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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 78)
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| meriter |
heres something, it's kind of a fruit basket but it has some interesting time changes and polyrhythms, I hope since this is a trance forum no one will judge me for the cheesy videogame music
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| Viber |
| quote: | Originally posted by meriter
heres something, it's kind of a fruit basket but it has some interesting time changes and polyrhythms, I hope since this is a trance forum no one will judge me for the cheesy videogame music
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I like video game music!
I'd say the 30 seconds intro is too long.
Maybe a bigger reverb? delay automation to give it some flavor? some fx\noises play around 2:37?
But i like this "genre" quite a bit, nice when you want to take a break from the 4x4:) |
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| meriter |
| quote: | Originally posted by Viber
some fx\noises play around 2:37?
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word it does seem empty there
| quote: | Originally posted by Viber
Ok, so this is an idea iv'e been working on this past week while trying to stick a bit more to the known formulas.
What do you think? any good? main melody worth stickin with?
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couple comments on the mix for this one, the highhats might be too loud/abrasive, feel free to ignore that though cause its mixed like every other track from the 90s which seems like the vibe youre going for
also might want to smash the bassline and bring it out more, its a little quiet |
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| Tyler James |
| quote: | Originally posted by meriter
heres something, it's kind of a fruit basket but it has some interesting time changes and polyrhythms, I hope since this is a trance forum no one will judge me for the cheesy videogame music
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I really like this! It reminds me of that Mario racing game for the N64, especially after 2:50. I would maybe change up the melody a little, it repeats like a thousand times and kind of gets old :/ Other than that though I really like it! |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Viber
Ok, so this is an idea iv'e been working on this past week while trying to stick a bit more to the known formulas.
What do you think? any good? main melody worth stickin with?
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needs a beefier kick, also not sure about the different melodies/pianos etc added in later - only add something if you think it benefits the track, not because you feel you have to......my 2c |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by meriter
heres something, it's kind of a fruit basket but it has some interesting time changes and polyrhythms, I hope since this is a trance forum no one will judge me for the cheesy videogame music
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its different thats for sure, have to admit i knda lost interest as the track went on - needs some sort of motif or something i feel - its an ok track tho! |
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| meriter |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
its different thats for sure, have to admit i knda lost interest as the track went on - needs some sort of motif or something i feel - its an ok track tho! |
| quote: | Originally posted by Tyler James
I really like this! It reminds me of that Mario racing game for the N64, especially after 2:50. I would maybe change up the melody a little, it repeats like a thousand times and kind of gets old :/ Other than that though I really like it! |
thanks, there are 4 variations of the main melody but i see what youre saying. might throw in a little change or something for the final ver |
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| Tyler James |
A deep house remix of one of my favorite songs that I'm working on. Normally, I would call this finished and just upload it officially. But I want to know if there is anything wrong with it before hand. (Also, I like cats) |
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| Storyteller |
| quote: | Originally posted by Tyler James
A deep house remix of one of my favorite songs that I'm working on. Normally, I would call this finished and just upload it officially. But I want to know if there is anything wrong with it before hand. (Also, I like cats) |
I wanted to start off with saying the groove you have is nice, but you really need to sync those vocals properly :). |
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| meriter |
| quote: | Originally posted by Tyler James
A deep house remix of one of my favorite songs that I'm working on. Normally, I would call this finished and just upload it officially. But I want to know if there is anything wrong with it before hand. (Also, I like cats) |
way better than the one I did when i was your age
but yeah sync the vocals, the hell are you thinking |
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| Tyler James |
| quote: | Originally posted by meriter
way better than the one I did when i was your age
but yeah sync the vocals, the hell are you thinking |
Now that you point it out, I don't even know what I was thinking! lol |
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| meriter |
| also you could probably safely end it around the 7 minute mark, thats a long ass track |
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