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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 142)
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
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Really like this. Perhaps make the beat a little classier, maybe add some varying snares with a Human live feel if possible. Great atmosphere. Try and finish but I think I get why it's tricky on thus one.
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So I think I'm nearly there with the DNB one I posted a few weeks back.
Tried to make it more original as people had mentioned it needed more originality and interest.
Will seek a singer once happy with this track.
Any thoughts?
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| jf2010 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Nice work again and great soundscape. Perhaps a little lead of some sort after a while in the drop might work. |
Thanks. Yeah the break needs some work definately. will keep that in mind. cheers for the feedback! |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by jf2010
a new wip im working on, any feedback would be good
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pretty ing good man, good sounds, nice progressions, reminds me of the older stuff
tiny criticism...i think the sub is maybe a little bit strong, the kick is struggling a little because of this i think - but thats only my preference |
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| evo8 |
inspired by sunshine :cool:
opinions welcome!
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| jf2010 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
pretty ing good man, good sounds, nice progressions, reminds me of the older stuff
tiny criticism...i think the sub is maybe a little bit strong, the kick is struggling a little because of this i think - but thats only my preference |
Thanks man. Glad you like :)
Yeah will defo keep that in mind. I always tend to overdo the sub slightly , will see what its like a bit lower, nice one. |
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| optik |
been a while, I've been busy =)
would love your views on this WIP:
god, I can't even remember how to embed! |
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| optik |
@Evolve140 about fallisjesse
nice new sounds - really like the complexity of the rhythmic parts.
bass drum isn't really doing it for me - this is the final element to make this a really great track; the groove is a little out without a strong kick I think
nice stuff |
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| Evolve140 |
| thanks for checking. I have the kick where it is because of the style, deep house, as long as it punches in the sub i'm pretty happy where it's at, interested to know what other people think too though. |
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| Evolve140 |
| quote: | Originally posted by optik
been a while, I've been busy =)
would love your views on this WIP:
god, I can't even remember how to embed! |
sounds pretty good dude, might want to try and build the energy at the beginning of the track a little better. but the bass sounds good. nice and warm. |
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| scorpradio |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Really like this. Perhaps make the beat a little classier, maybe add some varying snares with a Human live feel if possible. Great atmosphere. Try and finish but I think I get why it's tricky on thus one.
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Thanks Richard...just really trying something new. I think I found out what the issue is...the vocals are not aligning properly. |
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| djshire |
So there was a remix contest for Matt Lange feat. Jeza "I can't Forgive" on Anjunadeep, here's my submission
https://soundcloud.com/djshire/i-ca...rgiveness-remix
This isn't a WIP as a "how am I doing as a producer" kind of thing...also, this was a very rushed release, so its a lot of samples, presets, and even pre-made MIDI, so I'm wondering how I'm doing in terms of how it sounds and how my song structuring is going, and less on my actual....musicality? for lack of a better word. |
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