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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 115)
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by jf2010
New track here would be great to get some feedback, starts off a bit techy then into trance ,nice one
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really nice track man. Something about the mix tho doesnt sound quite right to me, sounds a little bit "closed", maybe too much compression/limiting, im not sure |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Domesty
Classic stuff! Sometimes the saws are little too ripping for me though ;D but enjoyed it!
Great picece! To my ears it sounds lil squished by compression/maximixzing though. Just a lil too loud mb.
This stuff is still solid!
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As xmas is around the corner and home with family and all that jazz, i had some time too play around and today i got started with this. Just a short loop, as put together today, but how does the mix sound so far? |
kick sounds a bit light to my ears |
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| Domesty |
Okay here is some rework and some off the initial arrangement. Is the kick/bass any better? Im usually very scared of widening my subs, which is propably why my low end lacks.
obviously i need to layer it more "moving" but does it now have kinda lows? prob too much reverb but try to work on that.
Sorry if its too quiet. I didnt max it properly yet.
[and sorry for double posting the wip will post the completed one next time] |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Domesty
Okay here is some rework and some off the initial arrangement. Is the kick/bass any better? Im usually very scared of widening my subs, which is propably why my low end lacks.
obviously i need to layer it more "moving" but does it now have kinda lows? prob too much reverb but try to work on that.
Sorry if its too quiet. I didnt max it properly yet.
[and sorry for double posting the wip will post the completed one next time] |
its just missing some lows still - rest of the mix is nicely done
try increasing the tail on the kick (if you can) - otherwise u might need a new kick |
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| evo8 |
pretty good! the mix is spot on to my ears anyway
not sure about that saw bass stab, it doesnt really fit even though it should, maybe try some fx on it or something?? |
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| Deillon |
Read the rules dude. |
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| Constantin |
| quote: | Originally posted by jf2010
New track here would be great to get some feedback, starts off a bit techy then into trance ,nice one
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It reminds me of the stuff I used to hear when tuned in DI.fm around ~'06 xD |
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| TranceElevation |
| quote: | Originally posted by Constantin
my WIP xD
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Trance is so beautiful when dynamic. Over compression destroys music, people doesn't seem to realize it.
Hope yours was a conscious choice.
That said, the piano is badly placed imo. It's a central element narrating the story of the track. It shouldn't be put apart.
But at the end is a matter of taste. If you like it that way go for it and ignore me. |
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| TranceElevation |
Astonishing work. Kick is ace!
Greatly built, keeps your interest. |
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| Constantin |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceElevation
Trance is so beautiful when dynamic. Over compression destroys music, people doesn't seem to realize it.
Hope yours was a conscious choice.
That said, the piano is badly placed imo. It's a central element narrating the story of the track. It shouldn't be put apart.
But at the end is a matter of taste. If you like it that way go for it and ignore me. |
Thank you for the feedback! Did I beefed up the lead to much xD ? |
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