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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 313)
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| evo8 |
this might be my submission for Colors 3
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
this might be my submission for Colors 3
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Lovely piece mate, no crits at all |
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| Richard Butler |
So does the break go with this track? I think it does but I just want to be sure.
Remember vocals are yet to be done this is very much a vocal track.
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| Vector A |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
this might be my submission for Colors 3 |
Nice one, reminds of late 1990s prog house. |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
So does the break go with this track? I think it does but I just want to be sure.
Remember vocals are yet to be done this is very much a vocal track.
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thanks for listening to mine
id be wary of how you are going to fit vocals into that track, id be inclined to make them incidental as track is quite full already! |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Vector A
Nice one, reminds of late 1990s prog house. |
tyvm! :) |
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| TranceElevation |
| Good point. Also, the low end of the kick eats too much. If he was to put it slightly in the back that would open up the spot for some vocals. |
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| Richard Butler |
Ok I did a lot of work on this now, is the structure weird?
Yet to do the transition from break to drop.
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Ok I did a lot of work on this now, is the structure weird?
Yet to do the transition from break to drop.
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appreciate you are trying to progress and develop this track Rich but i actually prefer the original version :-/ |
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| Richard Butler |
Evo since you posted I've now finished it and even added a washed out verb to the break end as you suggested, repaired the vocals, added some layers to the drop (quiet pads but they just fill the space some), did the transitions.
Is this track good enough to warrant getting in a decent vocalist? |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
this might be my submission for Colors 3
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Wow. The Bomb :) |
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| gordan100 |
I have worked on drums and added some more progression. I'm terrible at drums so please tell me what do you think...
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