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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Juan Paulino
Drop the bass!
Ready for climax. |
dont like the kick - too clicky or something, pity as everything else pretty good, sounds big |
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| Deillon |
| quote: | Originally posted by Juan Paulino
Your such a big time noob. |
What part of TranceElevation his post are you referring to, because I think he's spot on? |
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| Juan Paulino |
| quote: | Originally posted by Deillon
What part of TranceElevation his post are you referring to, because I think he's spot on? |
Do you like gabber music>? |
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| Juan Paulino |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
dont like the kick - too clicky or something, pity as everything else pretty good, sounds big |
You never like my kicks hehee, thanks homes. Will be pretty much upgrading to the SM9's by christmas. |
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| chris marsh |
| quote: | Originally posted by Juan Paulino
Drop the bass!
Ready for climax. |
i like the atmosphere here, very nice
agree on the kick, not a fan
vocal fx are cool and overall mix is pretty tight imo
also it sounds in key so that's a big improvement :)
did you make/program the synths or are they loops??
i think it needs to go somewhere, you have the same loops looping in the background it needs a progression/movment
but in my humble opinion your really coming along so keep at it dude |
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| Juan Paulino |
| quote: | Originally posted by chris marsh
i like the atmosphere here, very nice
agree on the kick, not a fan
vocal fx are cool and overall mix is pretty tight imo
also it sounds in key so that's a big improvement :)
did you make/program the synths or are they loops??
i think it needs to go somewhere, you have the same loops looping in the background it needs a progression/movment
but in my humble opinion your really coming along so keep at it dude |
Thank you so much man...Synths are programmed by me, one Logic's own ES P synth, new logic 10's retro synth FM style and one virus TI lead (last one). |
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| chris marsh |
guys i got the demo recording of the vocals back (she lives in another city so its a remote collab)
My honest opinion is im really not keen - there's a lot of tuning issues too. I quite like the verse ideas but the chorus sounds really out of tune to me and just not the feel i wanted
Im only posting this here cos im sure she wont see it - i wouldn't want to offend her with my opinions
I piad her upfront as well (im a noob at working with vocalists). From now on im recording all my own singers too
Whats your honest opinions guys??
Cheers
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| Juan Paulino |
| Sounds groovy, I like. |
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| jf2010 |
| quote: | Originally posted by chris marsh
guys i got the demo recording of the vocals back (she lives in another city so its a remote collab)
My honest opinion is im really not keen - there's a lot of tuning issues too. I quite like the verse ideas but the chorus sounds really out of tune to me and just not the feel i wanted
Im only posting this here cos im sure she wont see it - i wouldn't want to offend her with my opinions
I piad her upfront as well (im a noob at working with vocalists). From now on im recording all my own singers too
Whats your honest opinions guys??
Cheers
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Really liked that, imo the singer sounds very nice, the chorus part maybe is a little out on some words, but when i listened to it it sounds like it is purposely half spoken for effect & not that she's going out of tune .. the part at around 2.02 sounds cool aswell. Overall very nice & funky |
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| jf2010 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Juan Paulino
Drop the bass!
Ready for climax. |
Nice track, really liked the 1st minute with the atmospheres but was expecting a bigger bassline or something to come in at 1min mark! definitely has potential but would try and get a bigger bassline going to drive the track forward |
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| jf2010 |
Been messing around with the midi of 3rd Moon - DNA and came up with this, just the main section & outro done yet, goes a bit strange after the melody just started messing with stuff, see what ye think ..
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| Juan Paulino |
| quote: | Originally posted by jf2010
Nice track, really liked the 1st minute with the atmospheres but was expecting a bigger bassline or something to come in at 1min mark! definitely has potential but would try and get a bigger bassline going to drive the track forward |
Will give a try with my new desk setup, thanks man. |
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