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| evo8 |
so here it is
thanks for the comments!
struggled big time with this one. started on wednesday, was gonna be more of a techno thumper
listened back on thursday, wasnt working so changed it into what you hear now, spent a couple of hours thursday deciding how to use the vocals, got a new bassline going then arranged it yesterday |
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| Mise |
Thanks everybody for the comments, I will rework some details and probably repost.
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
so here it is
thanks for the comments!
struggled big time with this one. started on wednesday, was gonna be more of a techno thumper
listened back on thursday, wasnt working so changed it into what you hear now, spent a couple of hours thursday deciding how to use the vocals, got a new bassline going then arranged it yesterday |
well rounded track evo. |
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| deegee |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
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This is lovely. Especially the reverb/delay you have dripping off the vocal, it's pristine and right up my alley. How did you achieve it? |
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| deegee |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
so here it is
thanks for the comments!
struggled big time with this one. started on wednesday, was gonna be more of a techno thumper
listened back on thursday, wasnt working so changed it into what you hear now, spent a couple of hours thursday deciding how to use the vocals, got a new bassline going then arranged it yesterday |
Had to listen to this again. So very, very good. It's a really summer-y kind of track, if that makes sense. |
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by deegee
This is lovely. Especially the reverb/delay you have dripping off the vocal, it's pristine and right up my alley. How did you achieve it? |
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| djnitride |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
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Thats pretty damn good sounding considering Live's builtin reverb.
Really like the track by the way, great vocal, songwriting, and production all around. No gripes here!
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@evo8: Nice work on that remix! Sounding really good. I wish I could give you some constructive criticism but I can't find any issues with the track.
I need to work on making one as well but I have been struggling to live up the original track haha.
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Heres a techno jam session I recorded live today, any feedback on what works or what doesn't would be great
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| SystematicX1 |
| Thanks man...this track is turning out to be a special one for me. Appreciate the feedback!!:) |
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| Innocence Lost |
| quote: | Originally posted by deegee
Fan-ing-tastic on all fronts. As usual your technical skills are top notch, and this flows really nicely. More, please. |
Its good to see that you're back. Thanks so much for the comments. I would very much like to hear from you bro, your turn. |
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| Innocence Lost |
| quote: | Originally posted by cryophonik
OK, here's the remix pack (see the readme file for song info, crediting, etc):
http://tinyurl.com/lmhg6xs |
This is will be my current project, time for some fun.
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by djnitride
Thats pretty damn good sounding considering Live's builtin reverb.
Really like the track by the way, great vocal, songwriting, and production all around. No gripes here!
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@evo8: Nice work on that remix! Sounding really good. I wish I could give you some constructive criticism but I can't find any issues with the track.
I need to work on making one as well but I have been struggling to live up the original track haha.
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Heres a techno jam session I recorded live today, any feedback on what works or what doesn't would be great
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this is subjective but for me the kick would have to be a lot heavier and a bit more distorted, the bass is good
i would like it to have heavier hats as well and some percussion to drive things along |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by LoveHate
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Lovely mix and a catchy number. It is just asking for summer vocals. Maybe grunge up the piano a bit as the track progresses, perhaps with some hi passed slap back reverb etc, just to give a sense of journey. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
so here it is
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It needs a a better bassline in my opine, as it sounds sorta under nourished / unresolved. Like the floatey vocals, but think sometimes it would do to hear them more clearly with less fx drenching.
The odd attention grabbing stab would give it further interest. |
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