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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 232)
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mise
Top notch, I specially like the piano and the air of the cymbals. As Seandroid said, this definitely has potential.
Solid work here, nothing I can point.
After the feedback here is an update.
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Trying to figure out where I'm suppose to start, hmmm - first at all - turn you volume down!!! - you don't have to push it so much man lol - second, how many arps you have in this track - push it back a bit and allow your main melody to be hear lol - just to start our conversation.
Cheers,
Darek |
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| Innocence Lost |
Here's a 2 min intro i started today.
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| deegee |
| All the background stuff is nice and soft, which makes that kick way, way too hard and forward. The kick needs to be dropped down in the mix and replaced--something softer, a little closer to a classic 808 or 909. The kick you're using would be great in a blistering hard trance track, which this is not. |
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| OldLurker |
| quote: | Originally posted by Innocence Lost
Here's a 2 min intro i started today.
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Well, sounds promising.. reminds me some hard-trance tracks back from 2008-2009..mostly because of this familiar kick and rolling basses...I wonder what melody you will put there.
As for me..just a quick question here...how it sounds for those with proper monitoring system. Listenable? or any glaring problems with frequencies balance I can't hear on my headphones. Just want to start getting other stuff done and need some reference points.
Don't mind the delay speed-up clicks at 37-40s mark.
Thanks. |
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| TranceLover007 |
Put EQ on your initial piano sound - is piercing my ears (at least this reverb tail) - the rest sounds pretty good so far - would like to hear where you going to take this wip.
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Innocence Lost
Here's a 2 min intro i started today.
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Juan, sound like you slowly have an idea how good track suppose to sound :D but there is still a lots of room for improvement my friend for example those two mid-range bass line where they come in around 0:46 mark, are not sounding right to me and in addition when you low freq bass is coming, this whole thing (kick and your bass lines) are not clicking with me at all - they don't coexist properly together my friend.
As fat as your kick - initially (an till 1:15 mark) you could low cut this kick so doesn't stand out so much.
Cheers,
Darek |
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| deegee |
| quote: | Originally posted by OldLurker
As for me..just a quick question here...how it sounds for those with proper monitoring system. Listenable? or any glaring problems with frequencies balance I can't hear on my headphones. Just want to start getting other stuff done and need some reference points.
Don't mind the delay speed-up clicks at 37-40s mark.
Thanks. |
This is very pretty. It also sounds almost like you're quoting Greensleeves, was that deliberate? (Not criticizing, actually curious.) |
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| OldLurker |
No, never heard of Greensleeves, but will look it up when I get back from work.
And thanks for pointing out piano issue, Darek, will look at it, since I want to start making rough channel templates of sounds I will use constantly, and piano is one of it.
Thanks. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by OldLurker
As for me..just a quick question here...how it sounds for those with proper monitoring system. Listenable? or any glaring problems with frequencies balance I can't hear on my headphones. Just want to start getting other stuff done and need some reference points.
Don't mind the delay speed-up clicks at 37-40s mark.
Thanks. |
Great pallet of sounds here, love the reverb, what are u sing for it?
A couple of places the drums seem to duck which is a bit odd. |
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| Raphie |
so here is a crossover I'm working on, a mixture between rock, progressive and a bit of a deephouse lick. weird mixture. and a male vocalist (we don't hear those often here)
Not fully done yet, but far enough to get some feedback.
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
so here is a crossover I'm working on, a mixture between rock, progressive and a bit of a deephouse lick. weird mixture. and a male vocalist (we don't hear those often here)
Not fully done yet, but far enough to get some feedback.
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Is this a remix? - as those chords are really familiar R. - overall sounds cool but some of those vocal FX are kind of (lest put this way) weird ;)
Cheers man,
Darek |
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| Raphie |
| No it's an Original track, which I'm putting in a more modern setting. it's the chord progression of the track, i just did set into dotted eights. The vocal are the first takes and comped into something useable. We will still need to do a lot retakes. some nose and throat squeezing, but also some stronger lines. potential is there, just needs more work (like always) |
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