I got a much better mic and re recorded the singer (still a cheap preamp mind you)
Still needs fx and fills and finishing touches
If i was doing it again i would get the double tracking tighter :)
any critical feedback gratefully received
This is the first tune ie made in this style but enjoying so far
Chris
Incredible mix mate, I wouldn't change much about this as it has the right vibe, nice n chill.
Richard Butler
I really am going to find a decent vocalist for this one.
Can you advise me if I need to vary up the main synth sounds and perhaps also the way the main riff is played at certain points?
evo8
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Originally posted by Richard Butler
I really am going to find a decent vocalist for this one.
Can you advise me if I need to vary up the main synth sounds and perhaps also the way the main riff is played at certain points?
its not bad Richard, i was comparing it to this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CWYeGHETCSI
and maybe your track lacks a little depth in comparison? obviously you dont have a vocal yet which would make a huge difference
should point out im listening on my ue boom so cant say much about bass etc..
TranceElevation
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Originally posted by Richard Butler
I really am going to find a decent vocalist for this one.
Can you advise me if I need to vary up the main synth sounds and perhaps also the way the main riff is played at certain points?
Cool track.
The kick needs more punch imo.
Richard Butler
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Originally posted by evo8
its not bad Richard, i was comparing it to this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CWYeGHETCSI
and maybe your track lacks a little depth in comparison? obviously you dont have a vocal yet which would make a huge difference
should point out im listening on my ue boom so cant say much about bass etc..
Great pointer mate.
Having listened back today the sub isn't nearly present enough and I will be adding variation to the synths / drums and adding some stutters etc.
Biggest issue will be getting the right vocalist, not too mention making the vox sound propa!
TranceLover007
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Originally posted by chris marsh
Hi guys
I got a much better mic and re recorded the singer (still a cheap preamp mind you)
Still needs fx and fills and finishing touches
If i was doing it again i would get the double tracking tighter :)
any critical feedback gratefully received
This is the first tune ie made in this style but enjoying so far
Chris
This is really nice clean work Chris :D also nice dynamics and sound separation which is important (a specially in this style). As far as some FX, fills and finishing touches (as you mention already), would definitely help this track overall attractiveness - sweet work man !!!
Darek
TranceLover007
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Originally posted by Trancelover03591
Made this ambient track, thoughts?:
Very nice and slowly unwinding story right in front of you effect - really cool man.
I'm net really sure if I would be able to give you any constructive idea or even a criticism on how/what to do next ;) as this already sounds pretty good to me.
One of the cleanest and best work so far from you Caleb.
Darek
TranceLover007
quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
I really am going to find a decent vocalist for this one.
Can you advise me if I need to vary up the main synth sounds and perhaps also the way the main riff is played at certain points?
It sounds good Richard, you are on the right track with this production man. I would increase a bit this field of you sounds depth (instruments spread) for improving listening attractiveness but as evo8 mention already your vocal would help you in this area massively.
Me like it :D
Darek
TranceLover007
Thanks chris marsh, evo8 and Caleb for your opinion on my WIP.
So after some thinking and analyzing in depth this melodic development idea, I just release that I have to completely reconstruct/rebuild this track from ground up to the top.
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Thanks chris marsh, evo8 and Caleb for your opinion on my WIP.
So after some thinking and analyzing in depth this melodic development idea, I just release that I have to completely reconstruct/rebuild this track from ground up to the top.
