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| MSZ |
| probably needs some groove, there is also some piercing sibilance but do like it though. |
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| gordan100 |
I've added some plucks
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| gordan100 |
One more. Is bass too irritating?
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| MSZ |
| not really but I noticed you usually have some irritating harsh highs somewhere(like that crash here) maybe your speakers/headphones have high end recessed or something? |
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| MSZ |
there might be a track here somewhere under the ty thumpy kick, non existant low end, ty percs and un-eqed mid synth line. |
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| alanzo |
I did a thing, I think the intro for a JP-8000 demo. All the synths are JP-8000. This is the first mix where I attempted to tune the percussion to the root of the song, D#.
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by alanzo
I did a thing, I think the intro for a JP-8000 demo. All the synths are JP-8000. This is the first mix where I attempted to tune the percussion to the root of the song, D#.
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Dig this...Not sure about the arp/rolling bass tone as it seems to mid range and not enough low end. Course you could compress that in with your kick to make it more rounded.
Love the higher frequency chimes.
Not sure if this is a pre mix or not but the kick is clipping for sure. Seems like the whole percussion end needs some attention.
Otherwise, sounding tight so far.
FYI, Sunny lurks around here, he could probably be a better judge =OP
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Progressing with this track,gave it some depth and did a little arrangement on the composition. Still working it but seems like it is coming along. Need to work on my mid to outro parts
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
I've added some plucks
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I like it apart from the snare which is a bit lumpy
I had to do a Russia themed track due to the world cup.
What label for this anyone?
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| alanzo |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
compress that in with your kick to make it more rounded.
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will try that, thanks
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
kick is clipping for sure. Seems like the whole percussion end needs some attention.
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Bleh, probably can't hear that well in my headphones. It shouldn't be clipping but could definitely be over compressed.
Thanks for the tips! |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by MSZ
not really but I noticed you usually have some irritating harsh highs somewhere(like that crash here) maybe your speakers/headphones have high end recessed or something? |
No, everything is fine with the sound setup. I'm deaf a bit on the highs i guess :)
@Rich: Really not my style of music so i don't have any real comment, mix sound clean and good. I'm sorry for the pain from the track title caused by the croatian soccer team ;)
Got this muddy thing
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by alanzo
I did a thing, I think the intro for a JP-8000 demo. All the synths are JP-8000. This is the first mix where I attempted to tune the percussion to the root of the song, D#.
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love the bass sounds really good |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I like it apart from the snare which is a bit lumpy
I had to do a Russia themed track due to the world cup.
What label for this anyone?
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bit crazy for me Rich lol - really like the kick though |
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